Mexican Churros
Sweet Treat2 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a good job with your contest entry, Mystery Author. Your picture plus well chosen words paint a great image for readers. Good job with the syllable count per line. I would add a ~ at end of second line.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2021
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You did a good job with your contest entry, Mystery Author. Your picture plus well chosen words paint a great image for readers. Good job with the syllable count per line. I would add a ~ at end of second line.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 09-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2021
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Thank you
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This 5-7-5 writing prompt entry speaks proudly about fried doughnuts rolled in sugar, Mexican churros, the street vendors sell smilingly; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2021
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This 5-7-5 writing prompt entry speaks proudly about fried doughnuts rolled in sugar, Mexican churros, the street vendors sell smilingly; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 09-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2021
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Thank you
