O My God and Mother Nature!
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Comment from Badger_29
Alas, no more sixes for me. This phone is very clever usually earns six stars the juxtaposition of the contradictory nature of what you've written makes it a joy to read.
Blessings,
Brother � Cull
Darren
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Alas, no more sixes for me. This phone is very clever usually earns six stars the juxtaposition of the contradictory nature of what you've written makes it a joy to read.
Blessings,
Brother � Cull
Darren
Comment Written 10-Jul-2021
Comment from Boogienights
Love is what teaches you and whether you learn anything or not...it's worth it. I think that's what you are talking about in this intriguing poem. Thank you for sharing. :)
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Love is what teaches you and whether you learn anything or not...it's worth it. I think that's what you are talking about in this intriguing poem. Thank you for sharing. :)
Comment Written 26-Jun-2021
Comment from Ricky1024
This 5-75-Haiku, "Always!"
Feels like to me as if the person is in search of something that's missing going all the way back to birth.
Of course these Haikus extremely short.
That makes it even harder to review cuz there's not that much to review.
It is not a contest entry like most of the ones I've been reading.
But Good luck with this anyhow.
Doctor Ricky 1024
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This 5-75-Haiku, "Always!"
Feels like to me as if the person is in search of something that's missing going all the way back to birth.
Of course these Haikus extremely short.
That makes it even harder to review cuz there's not that much to review.
It is not a contest entry like most of the ones I've been reading.
But Good luck with this anyhow.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 26-Jun-2021
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written 5-7-5 poem to go in your book about nature. You used very good descriptive words and very beautiful imagery to go with your words. Blessings, Teri
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This is a very well written 5-7-5 poem to go in your book about nature. You used very good descriptive words and very beautiful imagery to go with your words. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 24-Jun-2021
Comment from royowen
Initially in our lives we learn from our parents, and then we expand on that base, depending on whether it is a firm foundation or not, that's important, Better than a shaky one, well done, good post, blessings Roy
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Initially in our lives we learn from our parents, and then we expand on that base, depending on whether it is a firm foundation or not, that's important, Better than a shaky one, well done, good post, blessings Roy
Comment Written 24-Jun-2021
Comment from Theodore McDowell
Bravo. like our true mother
we feel, learn or not. Wow, so well phrased. Well done my friend. You pack a lot into very precise and simple formats. It works nicely.
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Bravo. like our true mother
we feel, learn or not. Wow, so well phrased. Well done my friend. You pack a lot into very precise and simple formats. It works nicely.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2021
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Always!
by Alcreator Litt Dear
Great 5/7/5 about life. I think it's about this and that and how we exist in our own world of illusions. A very unique poem and interesting wording.
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Always!
by Alcreator Litt Dear
Great 5/7/5 about life. I think it's about this and that and how we exist in our own world of illusions. A very unique poem and interesting wording.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2021
Comment from pome lover
It always pays to learn from Mother Nature - after all, she has reaped beautiful rewards from this God-blessed land for centuries. She teaches basic survival as shown in plant life, growing in seemingly impossible places. And so, the same with man.
Congratulations on All Time Best and for being recognized.
Katharine - pome lover
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It always pays to learn from Mother Nature - after all, she has reaped beautiful rewards from this God-blessed land for centuries. She teaches basic survival as shown in plant life, growing in seemingly impossible places. And so, the same with man.
Congratulations on All Time Best and for being recognized.
Katharine - pome lover
Comment Written 24-Jun-2021
Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. It is interesting and unique. Excellent work! Thank you for sharing!
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I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. It is interesting and unique. Excellent work! Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 24-Jun-2021
Comment from lkdunny
True to form and layout, this piece meets all the requirements of a Haiku. This had a different feel, and again without the authors note, I would have lost the nature thyme on this Haiku. With your notes, I knew that mother was mother nature. It still felt like a bit of a stretch on weather the nature thyme was kept here. I'm not saying I didn't like it, I did. I could feel the words and the meaning, but my question would be the listing of it as a Haiku. Remember, I'm learning the new style stuff as I go. Good luck. lkdunny
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2006
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True to form and layout, this piece meets all the requirements of a Haiku. This had a different feel, and again without the authors note, I would have lost the nature thyme on this Haiku. With your notes, I knew that mother was mother nature. It still felt like a bit of a stretch on weather the nature thyme was kept here. I'm not saying I didn't like it, I did. I could feel the words and the meaning, but my question would be the listing of it as a Haiku. Remember, I'm learning the new style stuff as I go. Good luck. lkdunny
Comment Written 12-Aug-2006
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2006
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THANK YOU.
