Envy
Coping with ...9 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
He he he, there is much humour in these words and I just laughed my socks off when I read these words, I reckon that you might beat your dog with this one, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2021
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He he he, there is much humour in these words and I just laughed my socks off when I read these words, I reckon that you might beat your dog with this one, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2021
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Thank you very much Dolly, so glad you enjoyed it. Had a bit of fun writing this one!
Comment from Mama Baer
Absolutely adorable! Your show-off doggie, hehe. I still say he could learn a thing or two from you! This is so cute and speaks to the envy I often feel to garner a six-star review! Well done.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2021
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Absolutely adorable! Your show-off doggie, hehe. I still say he could learn a thing or two from you! This is so cute and speaks to the envy I often feel to garner a six-star review! Well done.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2021
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review! So glad you enjoyed it. I had a bit of fun writing it.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 3-7-5, Envy, has the right set up and notes that there is actually a dog writing on this site and it seems to be doing pretty well.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
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This 3-7-5, Envy, has the right set up and notes that there is actually a dog writing on this site and it seems to be doing pretty well.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
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Hi Bill, Thank you so much for reviewing. Appreciated.
Yes, who would have thought?!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Good play on words in your satori.
Your poem is short, succinct and descriptive. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Good imagery.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
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Good play on words in your satori.
Your poem is short, succinct and descriptive. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Good imagery.
Gypsy
Comment Written 08-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
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Thank you so much for your thoughtful and thorough review.
Comment from Mary Shifman
I like you poem. It reminds me of my teaching days when we had writing class. It's hard get children with low self-esteem to write, but some of them came out of the fear and became very good writers. Now, I'm interested in your dog. What kind of writing does he/she do and are they also on FanStory? Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021
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I like you poem. It reminds me of my teaching days when we had writing class. It's hard get children with low self-esteem to write, but some of them came out of the fear and became very good writers. Now, I'm interested in your dog. What kind of writing does he/she do and are they also on FanStory? Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021
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Thank you for your lovely review. Yes, he has done quite a few pieces for Fanstory and people enjoy his humorous observations on life and humans and so on. He writes for the Animal Crackers club a lot. And frequently gets six stars. Lol. So today he is not allowed to use the computer!
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Smart dog. Well, you have to draw the line somewhere. Right?
Comment from qlatifah
It is always fun to come up with creative ways to write and deliver poetry. Sometimes, not easy because of the different requirements for the poem and a lot more thought is put into it. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021
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It is always fun to come up with creative ways to write and deliver poetry. Sometimes, not easy because of the different requirements for the poem and a lot more thought is put into it. Nicely done.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021
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Thank you so much for reviewing. Any suggestions for improving it?
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No none at the moment
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent, fun 3-7-5 poem for the contest.
That's one talented dog.
Nice choice of art work.
Good luck in the contest,
hope your dog doesn't plan on entering.
Robert
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021
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This is an excellent, fun 3-7-5 poem for the contest.
That's one talented dog.
Nice choice of art work.
Good luck in the contest,
hope your dog doesn't plan on entering.
Robert
Comment Written 07-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021
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Thank you so much for your super review. No, he is not allowed access today to my computer! Lol.
Comment from MH Klemens
Your dog is a charmer. When he is preoccupied challenge his efforts, and
create a diversion. You will triumph, but he will not give up easily. If nothing else works, let the cat in.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021
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Your dog is a charmer. When he is preoccupied challenge his efforts, and
create a diversion. You will triumph, but he will not give up easily. If nothing else works, let the cat in.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021
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Lol. Thank you so much. A great review.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Haha, well he had to learn from a great writer--YOU. I enjoyed your fun contest entry, Mystery Author. Great job with the syllable count and the overall presentation.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021
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Haha, well he had to learn from a great writer--YOU. I enjoyed your fun contest entry, Mystery Author. Great job with the syllable count and the overall presentation.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 07-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021
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Thank you very much Jan. What a great review!
