The desperation poem
Just love me2 total reviews
Comment from dellsworthpoet
An interesting poem. I think the title says it all. The repetition of the word love is like a hammer fall. It continues to pull the attention.
A good read. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2021
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An interesting poem. I think the title says it all. The repetition of the word love is like a hammer fall. It continues to pull the attention.
A good read. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2021
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Thank you!!! I highly appreciate your words and the analogy with the hammer! It's reviews like this that keep me going.....
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You are welcome.
Comment from Paul McFarland
You have surely punched the desperation ticket. In reading your profile, I think you need to get more comfortable with the English language. When you do, things will go better. Be around English speaking people as much as you can.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021
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You have surely punched the desperation ticket. In reading your profile, I think you need to get more comfortable with the English language. When you do, things will go better. Be around English speaking people as much as you can.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021
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Hm........ Sorry, but I think you jumped to the wrong conclusion. I have moved to the US at 11 and been here ever since. People usually tell them my English is very good... I think, what you're trying to say is there is not a variety of different words in the poem? That doesn't necessarily mean I have bad English skills, maybe the poem is just not your type, too simple for you... Then I guess that should be your review to me...
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Sorry about the jump. My apologies. I will try you again when I see one of your poems.
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Me thinks you're jumping to conclusions :D I've been in US for 27 years and I've scored in the upper 20th percentile in good grammar on upwork.com :P. Maybe I was just quick, brusque, and negligent in writing this... who knows. Sometimes to be real, genuine, and raw - one types what's in his/her head without minding flow or grammar, I suppose.
