Our Love
A Site Contest Entry28 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This is a true love poem in every respect--romantically worded, vividly descriptive of all elements of a loving, lasting relationship. An appealing blend of literal and figurative language
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This is a true love poem in every respect--romantically worded, vividly descriptive of all elements of a loving, lasting relationship. An appealing blend of literal and figurative language
Comment Written 08-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
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Wow! Thank you so very much, your comments are so very encouraging and inspiring, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from mermaids
I love shape poem and you created a gem here. There is a feeling of love and a journey of love in your words. "Where love will be the corner stone" is a perfect line that shows the strength of love. Excellent rhyming of words that adds to the feel of your theme.
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I love shape poem and you created a gem here. There is a feeling of love and a journey of love in your words. "Where love will be the corner stone" is a perfect line that shows the strength of love. Excellent rhyming of words that adds to the feel of your theme.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2021
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Thank you very much, it was a great form for me to try again, your comments are so very encouraging, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Our Love", is an exceptionally well-written and heart-warming piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. I look forward to seeing your next post. Good luck with the contest. My fingers are crossed for you.
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"Our Love", is an exceptionally well-written and heart-warming piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. I look forward to seeing your next post. Good luck with the contest. My fingers are crossed for you.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2021
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Thank you for this wonderful review, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
***kahpot, as always you're very welcome.
Bless you and have a great weekend,
the Duchess
Comment from royowen
This looks very much like a perfectly manicured etheree poem symmetrically perfect in dimension telling of love fulfilled in circular fashion through your children, and I feel exactly the same way, when it comes to my own kids, expressed in grandchildren, which is most fulfilling, particularly since they're doing so well. Beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
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This looks very much like a perfectly manicured etheree poem symmetrically perfect in dimension telling of love fulfilled in circular fashion through your children, and I feel exactly the same way, when it comes to my own kids, expressed in grandchildren, which is most fulfilling, particularly since they're doing so well. Beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 08-Oct-2021
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Thank you very much Roy, your comments and encouragement mean a great deal, and yes children are us and the future, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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Most welcome
Comment from Janet Foor
Our Love is a sweet, and romantic poem where to people find their true love. Excellent artwork to compliment your poem.
I enjoyed the poem and the form. Quite and accomplishment.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
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Our Love is a sweet, and romantic poem where to people find their true love. Excellent artwork to compliment your poem.
I enjoyed the poem and the form. Quite and accomplishment.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 08-Oct-2021
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Thank you so very much for your encouraging comments, very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Bill Schott
This mirrored near-etheree poem, Our Love, with one line missing, provides a look at the diamond forged by time that is the love you cherish. Nice.
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This mirrored near-etheree poem, Our Love, with one line missing, provides a look at the diamond forged by time that is the love you cherish. Nice.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
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"One line missing?" yes joining nonets I thought I would give it a try, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is romantic, loving and promising as two people find love and enjoy each other and form a union that will eventually include children, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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This is romantic, loving and promising as two people find love and enjoy each other and form a union that will eventually include children, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 08-Oct-2021
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Our Love
by kahpot
Excellent entry for the Love Poem Poetry Contest. You inspired me to write one for the contest. Yours is very romantic and the presentation is outstanding. Good luck!
"our ** (jouneys) feat
of two hearts
finding
love" **journeys
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Our Love
by kahpot
Excellent entry for the Love Poem Poetry Contest. You inspired me to write one for the contest. Yours is very romantic and the presentation is outstanding. Good luck!
"our ** (jouneys) feat
of two hearts
finding
love" **journeys
Comment Written 08-Oct-2021
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Thank you so very much for your continued help and very encouraging comments-all fixed, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from patcelaw
This is a beautifully written and presented poem for the contest. I wish you the best in the contest and hope you have a wonderful day. God bless.
Patricia
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This is a beautifully written and presented poem for the contest. I wish you the best in the contest and hope you have a wonderful day. God bless.
Patricia
Comment Written 08-Oct-2021
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Thank you very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your presentation is beautiful--love the image, the color scheme, and the formatting of lines. You did an awesome job with the word choices, and the way the double nonet appears is super. Your words are well thought out and create great imagery. This is a great contest entry. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
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Your presentation is beautiful--love the image, the color scheme, and the formatting of lines. You did an awesome job with the word choices, and the way the double nonet appears is super. Your words are well thought out and create great imagery. This is a great contest entry. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 08-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
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Thank you for very encouraging comments and review,as always very much appreciated****kahpot
