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Comment from WriterHeather
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Super funny! This is a very witty way to potray writers block. These 5/7/5 pomes are hard but you always deliver! Well done! I expect this will do quite well in the contest!

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much for the six stars...it's very appreciated. :)
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
Excellent
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Awesome. This is s beautifully written 5 7 5 for writers block. Great photo to compliment your words as well. Nice overall
Presentation. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
    Thank you for this great review. I just had a day like this not too long ago, it's awful. I love to write. :)
Comment from Mary Shifman
Excellent
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We all have those moments when we can't think. Fortunately, the fog usually eventually clears. I find that fatigue makes my mind fuzzy. Anyway, I think this is pretty good so it can't be totally on the blink! Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
    Thank you for this great review and your positive words. :)
reply by Mary Shifman on 05-Oct-2021
    You are very welcome.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Excellent
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Very cute and a good picture. That's exactly the way writers block works and it gets worse with age. Best wishes to never feel writers block and keep on writing throughout your life.

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
    Thank you for this terrific review.. I really appreciate it. :)
Comment from Pam (respa)
Excellent
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-Good artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-Each line flows well into
the next one showing the
difficulties of writer's block.
-I like your concluding line
that adds a little humor!
-Good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 05-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
    Thank you for this nice review. I really do have days like this! Thanks again. :)
reply by Pam (respa) on 05-Oct-2021
    You are welcome; I think we all have days like that!
Comment from robyn corum
Excellent
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Dear Mystery Writer,

This is a cute poem and a fun entry in the 5/7/5 writer's block contest. The only problem is that your second line does not have enough syllables. You are lacking one, I believe. Thanks and good luck!

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 Comment Written 05-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
    Thank you for reading. I looked it up and there are 3 sllyables in ideas. So I think its correct....I was surprised by that. :) Maybe you'd reconsider the rating given? :)
reply by robyn corum on 05-Oct-2021
    Certainly!