Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Good play on words in your satori.

Your poem is short, succinct and descriptive. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Good imagery.

Gypsy

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021

Thank you so much for this great review, it's very appreciated. :)

Comment from Mama Baer

Exceptional

Another winning piece, dear boogienights (love your name!). This is adorable and explains so well what I often feel. I am such a fan of your writings!

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021

Thank you so much for this excellent review and your gracious words. I enjoy your work as well. :)

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Congratulations on your first place win. I really like the end rhymes, the perfect image, and the overall message.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021

Thank you, I was honored to win because there were so many great entries. I appreciate you reading my poem. :)

Comment from Raul1

Exceptional

This is a very clever strategic and interesting 5-7-5 writer's block contest entry. Congratulations on winning the competition. It looks like six stars to me. Great job!

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021

Thank you, that's so kind of you. I appreciate you taking the time to read my poem and the excellent rating. :)

reply by Raul1 on 07-Oct-2021

You're welcome! :)

Comment from Bonnie Seach

Excellent

I love this one! It rhymes, it's clever and it's funny!
A haiku is supposed to be emotive. This poem does it for me! It sums up writers block I a cheerful way. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes for the contest

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021

Thank you so much for reading my poem and for this nice review. :)

reply by Bonnie Seach on 09-Oct-2021

💯👌😊🌹

reply by Bonnie Seach on 23-Nov-2021

I've been off for a few weeks. I hope all is well with you. Take care. Fond greetings.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

He he he, I'm loving the rhymes here and your message is clear, writer's block has consumed this poet, but wait a minute, you just created a masterpiece! Love Dolly x

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021

Thank you, you have made my night with this fantastic review. :)

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

Excellent image to accompany your work - and yes, many will identify with the feelings expressed. Great ideas simply vanish, never to be seen again. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2021

Thank you for this great review. I've had weeks of no inspiration...but happily it comes back. Thanks again. :)

Comment from Paul McFarland

Excellent

I like the rhyming Haiku. You are addressing a problem we have all had from time to time. My biggest writer's block is spending most of my free time on this web site.

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2021

Mine too! I get so caught up reading other people's work, I don't have time to think of new ideas. Oh, well, I love it. Thanks again. :)

Comment from C. Gale Burnett

Excellent

I can definitely relate to your wonderful 5-7-5. Great ending rhyme. Overall presentation is wonderful! The poem had me laughing :)
Very best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2021

Thank you so much, that means a lot to me. :)

reply by C. Gale Burnett on 07-Oct-2021

You are so welcome :)

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This writer's block 5-7-5, What Happened?, has the proper formatting and finds the secret code for making sense out of words on a page.

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2021

Thank you for this review and taking the time to read my poem. :)