Healing Balm
1-6-1 poetry7 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Melissa,
This is a well written mono=rhym 1-6-1 poem for the prompt.
It shows your faith and the calming effect Bible verses have
on the reader.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
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Melissa,
This is a well written mono=rhym 1-6-1 poem for the prompt.
It shows your faith and the calming effect Bible verses have
on the reader.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 11-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
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Hi Joan. Thanks so much :)
Melissa
Comment from artisart4u
Yes, that is correct. I just had this in bible study yesterday. You couldn't have picked a better subject.
You have the correct amount of syllables.
Congratulations on your win.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021
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Yes, that is correct. I just had this in bible study yesterday. You couldn't have picked a better subject.
You have the correct amount of syllables.
Congratulations on your win.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021
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Hello. Thank you for sharing about your Bible Study. I know that I always feeling a healing touch when I read or recite Psalms 23... so comforting to me. :).
Melissa
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
Very creative use of the 1-6-1 form to describe the effect of Psalm 23:4, or really the effects of so many wonderful psalms and other Bible verses. What a beautiful picture!
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2021
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Very creative use of the 1-6-1 form to describe the effect of Psalm 23:4, or really the effects of so many wonderful psalms and other Bible verses. What a beautiful picture!
Comment Written 06-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2021
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Thanks so much!!
Comment from lynglyng
You do a great job at conveying a complete idea to the reader. Good rhyming and good flow. This is a difficult type poem to do. I felt that you executed it perfectly with the rules. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2021
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You do a great job at conveying a complete idea to the reader. Good rhyming and good flow. This is a difficult type poem to do. I felt that you executed it perfectly with the rules. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2021
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Thanks so much.
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
A most beautiful presentation for the 1-6-1. The book of Psalms is definitely balm for the soul. The gentle flow of the scriptures bring a healing, calming peace.
Great creation for the contest!
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2021
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A most beautiful presentation for the 1-6-1. The book of Psalms is definitely balm for the soul. The gentle flow of the scriptures bring a healing, calming peace.
Great creation for the contest!
Comment Written 05-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2021
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Thanks so much.
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You are so welcome.
Comment from kahpot
Excellent, yes the healing can be so wonderfully calm when our faith truly believes, love the chosen artwork for this poem, very well presented and best wishes for your contest***kahpot
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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Excellent, yes the healing can be so wonderfully calm when our faith truly believes, love the chosen artwork for this poem, very well presented and best wishes for your contest***kahpot
Comment Written 04-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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Thank you.
Comment from Liz O'Neill
The word play in this poem is delightful. Psalm 23 reminds me of my favorite Psalm. Psalm 139 speaks of our protection too. This is very nicely expressed.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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The word play in this poem is delightful. Psalm 23 reminds me of my favorite Psalm. Psalm 139 speaks of our protection too. This is very nicely expressed.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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Thank you.
