Comment from Senyai

Excellent

Hi Ricky,

I am pretty much with you on many things written here. Your style is unique and if I dare say, this might have come off better as prose... but Shakespeare wrote in all forms so I might be wrong.

Proposing all 13 sins or wrongs the USA is committing daily is a great idea. To point out the disintegration of the US is a timely and urgent appeal to STOP the slide downward. In your appeal, your adamant messages are well founded and proposed in descending order.

Ingenious idea, Ricky! Might need refining just a bit to project your intended impact.

Well done.

Have a great week :))
Senyai

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021

Thanks for your review and interest in this one.
Doctor Ricky 1024

Comment from Katrina White

Average

I did connect to your writing, as it didn't hold my attention, and I seem dry and lacking your true self. I was looking forward to reading it when I saw your topic, but it was bizarre, at least to me.

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021

Well you're my first review and thank you very much and now we will see what we will see?
Doctor Ricky 1024
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