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Climb Upon My Knee

Grandfather tells the importance of a untied country

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Comment from CL Huth
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I really enjoyed this in a bittersweet kind of way. Probably, because you'd think we would've learned better by now, and yet community seems so far away. Like people just don't know how to care about others. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
    I think some of us know how to care, but again, some of us just don't care. Thanks for your read and for providing feedback.
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very well written poem you have penned for the Old People changing the world writing prompt. You used very good descriptive and very true words. You used very good imagery also. I like the way you started it out. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
    Thank you for taking the time to read and for your encouraging feedback.
Comment from Anne Johnston
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This is a great entry for the contest. Nice picture to illustrate, and great advice that is being given. Very well written. Your last verse sums it up:
"So, let's hope our country
Will again join together and
Follow the guidelines that will
Provide a victory over Covid 19
Just as we won over evil in WWII"

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much for taking the time to read, review and comment. Greatly appreciated.
reply by Anne Johnston on 02-Oct-2021
    You are very welcome
Comment from pookietoo
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A great poem for the contest. Good luck to you in the contest. I enjoyed reading this poem. Take care, smile, and have a great day. You are loved. :) :)

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much for taking the time to read, and review. Greatly appreciated.