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Too Many Things

I've collected...

15 total reviews 
Comment from WriterHeather
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This is a very funny and relatable poem you have penned for the contest. I think its wonderful that you cherish the things you collect. Never give them up. Love your work

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
    Thank you for this fantastic six star review and the good advice. :)
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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This reminds me of going to thrift sales and bringing more trinkets home. Do you get rid of the ones that you had or do you use the new products? Do you have extra space so you can store them (after you get done using them)?

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
    I usually just add them to my collections...that's my problem. I really do love thrift stores though...you as well? Thanks for reading. :)
reply by Rosemary Everson1 on 02-Oct-2021
    I love thrift sales.
Comment from Wendy G
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Yes, I understand completely. You have captured that tension between trying to live simply and the memories and stories and nostalgia of each item. Well written and best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
    Thank you, I appreciate this fine review. :)
Comment from AliMom
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I showed your poem to my spouse because I absolutely get it. I hoped he would get it too as he is constantly pressuring me to get rid of my things, my precious remembrances. As if I ever could. Thank you for your confirmation of my feelings about my 'stuff'. It is a fine poem that everyone who is a collector can identify with. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
    Thanks for reading my poem and being a kindred spirit. My husband doesn't get it either, but I still keep him around anyway. :) Thanks again for reading. :)
Comment from pookietoo
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A great poem for the contest. Yes. , you did have a messy place. Enjoy life and have a wonderful day. Live life through a child's eyes. Smile. Others will too.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
    Thank you so much for reading my poem...have a great evening. :)
reply by pookietoo on 01-Oct-2021
    You are welcome.
Comment from Mama Baer
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Delightful! Oh, we are kindred spirits, my friend. I, too, struggle with giving or throwing away my "precious" things. They aren't worth much monetarily, but boy do they hold a wealth of memories! This is a delighful poem.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
    Thank you so much for this great review, it means a lot to me. :)
Comment from Teri7
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This is a really well worded and great poem you have penned. I read it to my husband and told him that was how I felt too. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
    Thank you for this wonderful review, I really appreciate it. :)
Comment from Mary Shifman
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I like your poem about messes. You have rhymed it very well and you have great rhythm. Unfortunately, I can identify all too well. It is so hard to know what to do with things that you have collected over time and memorabilia from parents, etc. I have just been passing some of it on. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
    Thank you for this nice review, I really do appreciate it. :)
reply by Mary Shifman on 01-Oct-2021
    You are welcome.
reply by Mary Shifman on 01-Oct-2021
    You are very welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A fun write about collecting getting out of hand and storing all these items poses a big problem. I hoard clothes and I just have to throw things out eventually, much enjoyed, fine rhymes and meter, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
    Thank you for taking time to read my poem, as usual I appreciate your input.:)
Comment from RodG
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Oh, do I relate to the Speaker in this poem. Like her, I collect too many things and I don't want part with any. Good description of what she owns . I especially like stanza 4. And your last stanza sums up my attitude, too. Rod

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
    I'm glad I'm not the only one. When I was little I used to collect stray animals, but my parents put a stop to that fast..lol. Thanks so much for reading my poem. :)