I Am A Daughter Of God
How I Feel About Myself13 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a very nice and very well written free verse poem you have penned for the Self Improvement Free Verse Poem writing prompt. You used very good descriptive and true words. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings Teri
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021
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This is a very nice and very well written free verse poem you have penned for the Self Improvement Free Verse Poem writing prompt. You used very good descriptive and true words. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings Teri
Comment Written 07-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021
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Thanks.
Comment from Anne Johnston
I am a child of God. There is no greater achievement that we could wish for than to be loved by the Lord. Certainly He gives us peace, love, and confidence as we daily seek His face.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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I am a child of God. There is no greater achievement that we could wish for than to be loved by the Lord. Certainly He gives us peace, love, and confidence as we daily seek His face.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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Right.
Comment from Senyai
Hi Pookietoo,
This is a dandy self improvement free verse poem! I like that you graciously touched on your high points and just as graciously touched in areas you find you can improve. Honest and forthright with a touch of class, this is a strong entry for the coming contest!
Great writing!
Always,
Senyai
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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Hi Pookietoo,
This is a dandy self improvement free verse poem! I like that you graciously touched on your high points and just as graciously touched in areas you find you can improve. Honest and forthright with a touch of class, this is a strong entry for the coming contest!
Great writing!
Always,
Senyai
Comment Written 01-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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Thanks so much!
Comment from Paul McFarland
That's different with all the lines starting with "I". After reading your poem, I think I know you pretty well.
I see you are loved and you have many friends.
There's one thing from you I implore.
I don't know how far that your friendship extends.
I hope you have room for one more.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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That's different with all the lines starting with "I". After reading your poem, I think I know you pretty well.
I see you are loved and you have many friends.
There's one thing from you I implore.
I don't know how far that your friendship extends.
I hope you have room for one more.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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Yes, you are my friend.
Comment from robyn corum
Pookie,
Sounds like you've already got most things figured out! That's pretty good - you should be teaching classes to the rest of us!!! *smile* This is a sweet and fun poem focused on the most important things in life and I enjoyed it! Good luck!
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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Pookie,
Sounds like you've already got most things figured out! That's pretty good - you should be teaching classes to the rest of us!!! *smile* This is a sweet and fun poem focused on the most important things in life and I enjoyed it! Good luck!
Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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Thank you! Did you read my childhood Christmas memories?
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is certainly a self improvement poem as you blow your own trumpet and all praise is from your own point of view. You made me smile here, good luck with the contest and I hope the mirror never lies to you, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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This is certainly a self improvement poem as you blow your own trumpet and all praise is from your own point of view. You made me smile here, good luck with the contest and I hope the mirror never lies to you, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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Thanks.
Comment from lyenochka
I like how you described yourself as a child of God and one who wants to live just as the Lord Jesus taught. I especially liked your stanza of "I can" statements. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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I like how you described yourself as a child of God and one who wants to live just as the Lord Jesus taught. I especially liked your stanza of "I can" statements. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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Thank you.
Comment from Henry White II
This is a good poem. What I get for this is that the first and last stanzas are about who you are in the present; "I am" statements. Next it moves to the future "I will" statements. Then moves to improving the present, "I can." I really enjoyed this work. Thank you and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2021
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This is a good poem. What I get for this is that the first and last stanzas are about who you are in the present; "I am" statements. Next it moves to the future "I will" statements. Then moves to improving the present, "I can." I really enjoyed this work. Thank you and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2021
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Thank you.
Comment from Wendy G
This is a thorough analysis for the self-improvement free verse contest. Is free verse permitted to rhyme? Not sure - might be best to check. Maybe you could make the first stanza also have four lines by saying in the third line "I am loved, and have many friends" all in one line. Just a suggestion. You sound happy and fulfilled. Well done. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2021
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This is a thorough analysis for the self-improvement free verse contest. Is free verse permitted to rhyme? Not sure - might be best to check. Maybe you could make the first stanza also have four lines by saying in the third line "I am loved, and have many friends" all in one line. Just a suggestion. You sound happy and fulfilled. Well done. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 29-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2021
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Yes, free verse is permitted to rhyme.
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I wrote 10 syllables in each line so I can't change the third line in the first stanza.
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The third and fourth lines do not have ten syllables. If you join them together they will.
Comment from irishauthorme
A great message, thank you, and I like your American Flag 'T' shirt!
There are some good messages here for anyone and everyone to read.
Anyone who believes strives to live a life that serves a purpose, and to do right by others.
The way the world is going now, I have my doubts.
Thank you for sharing this!
irish
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2021
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A great message, thank you, and I like your American Flag 'T' shirt!
There are some good messages here for anyone and everyone to read.
Anyone who believes strives to live a life that serves a purpose, and to do right by others.
The way the world is going now, I have my doubts.
Thank you for sharing this!
irish
Comment Written 29-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2021
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You are welcome.
