I am He
Lord save my grandma.75 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
What a beautiful story/ poem written from the heart, with great understanding and care. The rhyme and metre are both smooth and effective. Loved your closing couplet.
Wendy
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What a beautiful story/ poem written from the heart, with great understanding and care. The rhyme and metre are both smooth and effective. Loved your closing couplet.
Wendy
Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
Comment from Sanku
Children are innocent and their faith is total .Sages say that in the purest form of faith only God will be visible to you. Your poem was a fine poem og faith .Thanks for posting.
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Children are innocent and their faith is total .Sages say that in the purest form of faith only God will be visible to you. Your poem was a fine poem og faith .Thanks for posting.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
Comment from country ranch writer
Nice presentation and set up this poem. You never walk alone he is always there in spirit praying for everyone in his fold. Heaven waists for those who are sick and fragile. When it is your time he will send you home there is no time clock to punch letting us know when it is time to come home.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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Nice presentation and set up this poem. You never walk alone he is always there in spirit praying for everyone in his fold. Heaven waists for those who are sick and fragile. When it is your time he will send you home there is no time clock to punch letting us know when it is time to come home.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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Our country needs God badly, we are being destroyed from within, Thank you for your review and stars.
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Comment from T B Botts
Hello Willie,
I loved this poem. It was well written and the content gives one hope. I could see Jesus comforting that little boy. Well done!
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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Hello Willie,
I loved this poem. It was well written and the content gives one hope. I could see Jesus comforting that little boy. Well done!
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
Comment Written 29-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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Thank you, Tom. America needs Jesus badly. You honor me with your review and six stars, thank you.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It is hard for small children to understand death and the finality of it, it is hard for adults too. We none of us live forever and all good things come to an end, this is the sad part of life. A faithful and honest write Willie, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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It is hard for small children to understand death and the finality of it, it is hard for adults too. We none of us live forever and all good things come to an end, this is the sad part of life. A faithful and honest write Willie, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 29-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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Thank you, Dolly. Your reviews are always very appreciated.
