I am He
Lord save my grandma.75 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
Precious and sweet conversation between the two. I speak with the Lord constantly. I have since a child. He saved me and raised me from the dead.
Sending you my best today as always for this marvelous piece,
Sally :))
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Precious and sweet conversation between the two. I speak with the Lord constantly. I have since a child. He saved me and raised me from the dead.
Sending you my best today as always for this marvelous piece,
Sally :))
Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
Comment from bhogg
We'll written with a pleasant rhyme scheme that will move your readers quickly through. Accompanied by beautiful and appropriate artwork. Oops, seems like I haven't used enough characters.
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We'll written with a pleasant rhyme scheme that will move your readers quickly through. Accompanied by beautiful and appropriate artwork. Oops, seems like I haven't used enough characters.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
The overall presentation is wonderful. The poem was soothing and calming. I wish all children had an opportunity to read this; it would do their hearts good. Thank you for this beautiful creation.
Gale
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The overall presentation is wonderful. The poem was soothing and calming. I wish all children had an opportunity to read this; it would do their hearts good. Thank you for this beautiful creation.
Gale
Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
Comment from Ben Colder
Excellent write. I see nothing wrong with this and compliment the writer for a job well done. Thanks for sharing your talent. My blessings to you. Have a great day.
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Excellent write. I see nothing wrong with this and compliment the writer for a job well done. Thanks for sharing your talent. My blessings to you. Have a great day.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
Comment from jenintorre
This is a very beautiful and uplifting poem. I really enjoyed reading it although I am not religious and not sure that a small child would be comforted by those words. Superb rhyme. Blessings. Jen
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This is a very beautiful and uplifting poem. I really enjoyed reading it although I am not religious and not sure that a small child would be comforted by those words. Superb rhyme. Blessings. Jen
Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
Comment from Hitcher
A real nice feel good slice of spiritual poetry offered up here. Your story telling abilities shine through here and allow the reader to feel the pure innocence of the child's emotions. The smooth flow and excellent rhyme enhance the quality of the poem. The Lord's decision was the icing on the cake : )) Nice!
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A real nice feel good slice of spiritual poetry offered up here. Your story telling abilities shine through here and allow the reader to feel the pure innocence of the child's emotions. The smooth flow and excellent rhyme enhance the quality of the poem. The Lord's decision was the icing on the cake : )) Nice!
Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
Comment from oliver818
This is a very nice and touching poem. I like the way you wrote about your grandmother in such a touching way. The ending is particularly nice. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
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This is a very nice and touching poem. I like the way you wrote about your grandmother in such a touching way. The ending is particularly nice. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Willie P. Smith,
Nice piece of Spiritual Poetry having impressive phraseology, smooth flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme, and depiction of instilling faith in child's mind about God and His power to keep his grandma safe and happy.
The last but one stanza is particularly noteworthy.
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Hello Willie P. Smith,
Nice piece of Spiritual Poetry having impressive phraseology, smooth flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme, and depiction of instilling faith in child's mind about God and His power to keep his grandma safe and happy.
The last but one stanza is particularly noteworthy.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
Comment from Cogitator
This must be from one of your books. I usually reserve commenting for posts of substance, rather than structure. Categorically speaking, I would tag this poem as cute, whimsical, and childlike. ...John
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This must be from one of your books. I usually reserve commenting for posts of substance, rather than structure. Categorically speaking, I would tag this poem as cute, whimsical, and childlike. ...John
Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"I am He", is an exceptionally well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. It was a privilege to read and review this talented poet's work. To me this is a true six. I look forward to seeing your next post.
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"I am He", is an exceptionally well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. It was a privilege to read and review this talented poet's work. To me this is a true six. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
