I am He
Lord save my grandma.75 total reviews
Comment from Anne Johnston
Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem about a child's simple faith, and a Saviour who heard his cry and answered. Children accept truth so easily and when faced with a problem trust the Lord to hear their prayer.
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Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem about a child's simple faith, and a Saviour who heard his cry and answered. Children accept truth so easily and when faced with a problem trust the Lord to hear their prayer.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
Comment from J. Dennis
Children are thinking about their favorite person which usually is a grandparent. Most of the time their thoughts are of the wonderful person who loves them unconditionally.
When that person is sick or getting ready to pass away, they feel the sadness in their heart.
Your poem identified and expressed this sorrow. And with this you gave the young child a visit from Jesus who explained where Grandmother was going and the changes she would have/see. This was very nicely done. It was explained with the love that the child would understand as he grew older.
Thank you for a poem that created a sense of love.
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Children are thinking about their favorite person which usually is a grandparent. Most of the time their thoughts are of the wonderful person who loves them unconditionally.
When that person is sick or getting ready to pass away, they feel the sadness in their heart.
Your poem identified and expressed this sorrow. And with this you gave the young child a visit from Jesus who explained where Grandmother was going and the changes she would have/see. This was very nicely done. It was explained with the love that the child would understand as he grew older.
Thank you for a poem that created a sense of love.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
Comment from Boogienights
This is so sad and yet uplifting at the same time. It's a wonderful story about how so much comfort can come from the Lord. It puts a different perspective on dying. Thank you for sharing. :)
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This is so sad and yet uplifting at the same time. It's a wonderful story about how so much comfort can come from the Lord. It puts a different perspective on dying. Thank you for sharing. :)
Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
Comment from Cristine22
That was very pleasant to read, a lovely poem with a good message. The story has a good arc while maintaining your chosen rhythm and rhyming scheme. Well done!
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That was very pleasant to read, a lovely poem with a good message. The story has a good arc while maintaining your chosen rhythm and rhyming scheme. Well done!
Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
Comment from royowen
I think God is always in the centre of every child's prayer, why else would He say, "Forbid them not, for such is the kingdom of Heaven." This is a beautifully written poem, I read it to my wife who is a much needed Nannie, and much loved, and I think she will remain while they need her. Beautifully written, superbly done, blessings Roy
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I think God is always in the centre of every child's prayer, why else would He say, "Forbid them not, for such is the kingdom of Heaven." This is a beautifully written poem, I read it to my wife who is a much needed Nannie, and much loved, and I think she will remain while they need her. Beautifully written, superbly done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hi Willie. This is a beautifully crafted poem. I like the way Christ appears and then after delivering His message, He slips away again. It is written with conscious thought and would be most endearing along the way. Well done! xoxo Kiwi
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Hi Willie. This is a beautifully crafted poem. I like the way Christ appears and then after delivering His message, He slips away again. It is written with conscious thought and would be most endearing along the way. Well done! xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
Comment from dragonpoet
Willie,
This is a wonderful uplifting poem about the power of faith and prayer that matches perfectly with the artwork. It shows how close we can be to Jesus without even knowing it.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
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Willie,
This is a wonderful uplifting poem about the power of faith and prayer that matches perfectly with the artwork. It shows how close we can be to Jesus without even knowing it.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
Comment from Eternal Muse
That is a powerful spiritual poetry. A little boy with a dying grandmother meets Jesus on the way who comforts him and soothes his grief. He told the boy the grandma is going to die, and there is no way she can stay on earth any more, but she would stay for a while to say good-bye.
This poem gave me chills. So powerfully written. Only He has a powerful over life and death, and are destinies are already pre-ordained.
Much enjoyed, thanks or sharing.
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That is a powerful spiritual poetry. A little boy with a dying grandmother meets Jesus on the way who comforts him and soothes his grief. He told the boy the grandma is going to die, and there is no way she can stay on earth any more, but she would stay for a while to say good-bye.
This poem gave me chills. So powerfully written. Only He has a powerful over life and death, and are destinies are already pre-ordained.
Much enjoyed, thanks or sharing.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
Comment from Gert sherwood
Lord save my grandma.
I am He
Willie P. Smith my what a beautiful rhyming poem along with of Jesus holding a little boy's hand, Thank you for sharing your excellent poem.
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Lord save my grandma.
I am He
Willie P. Smith my what a beautiful rhyming poem along with of Jesus holding a little boy's hand, Thank you for sharing your excellent poem.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
Comment from Eunice Amero
You and I are a pair. I am a published author and I love rhyming poetry. I loved your poem. Wow!. Jesus is always near. I feel the same way other styles are a story. Could we rock. Love writing. You seem like a very nice person. Keep up the good work.
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You and I are a pair. I am a published author and I love rhyming poetry. I loved your poem. Wow!. Jesus is always near. I feel the same way other styles are a story. Could we rock. Love writing. You seem like a very nice person. Keep up the good work.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
