I am He
Lord save my grandma.75 total reviews
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Nice story, nice poem.
"Then as quickly as the Lord appeared.
He released the boy's hand and disappeared." - no period after 'appeared'
he's always near - period after 'near'
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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Nice story, nice poem.
"Then as quickly as the Lord appeared.
He released the boy's hand and disappeared." - no period after 'appeared'
he's always near - period after 'near'
Best wishes.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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Thank you, Wayne, for the review and help also the stars.
Comment from ESOSTINE
Truly, God is always near to us. We only need to have faith and beckon on Him, and He will surely give an ear to the heart that believes. Thanks for sharing your inspiration.
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Truly, God is always near to us. We only need to have faith and beckon on Him, and He will surely give an ear to the heart that believes. Thanks for sharing your inspiration.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2022
Comment from Gina Schneller
Beautifully written. I absolutely loved it! The words flow nicely and keep the reader interested. Love the artwork as well. Thank you so much for sharing with us all. Best of luck in your writing journey.
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Beautifully written. I absolutely loved it! The words flow nicely and keep the reader interested. Love the artwork as well. Thank you so much for sharing with us all. Best of luck in your writing journey.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2022
Comment from John Ciarmello
Well done! A beautiful tribute to the Easter season. You write with a definite flare and confidence. I enjoyed this read and thank you for sharing. Happy Easter
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Well done! A beautiful tribute to the Easter season. You write with a definite flare and confidence. I enjoyed this read and thank you for sharing. Happy Easter
Comment Written 16-Apr-2022
Comment from jessizero
This was a very sweet story/poem. I am glad that the boy discovered that Heaven is a wonderful place, but I am very glad that his grandmother was able to stay on earth a little longer. Thanks for sharing.
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This was a very sweet story/poem. I am glad that the boy discovered that Heaven is a wonderful place, but I am very glad that his grandmother was able to stay on earth a little longer. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2022
Comment from Theodore McDowell
A very heartwarming post exhibiting the comfort the Lord can provide in the face of death and loss. I loved the dialogue between the young boy and the Lord and how it comforted him and changed his perspective.
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A very heartwarming post exhibiting the comfort the Lord can provide in the face of death and loss. I loved the dialogue between the young boy and the Lord and how it comforted him and changed his perspective.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2022
Comment from Goosey Gander
Oh, you did a wonderful job! I remember my great-great-grandma's funeral; the mood was very similar to the vibe you get reading this poem. I just think this poem is so fantastic!
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Oh, you did a wonderful job! I remember my great-great-grandma's funeral; the mood was very similar to the vibe you get reading this poem. I just think this poem is so fantastic!
Comment Written 16-Apr-2022
Comment from Cecilia R
Your poem is beautiful. It paints a picture of how strong faith can still the fears and help with understanding. Your story in verse flows smoothly. I enjoyed reviewing it. The picture is a perfect compliment.
Cecilia
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Your poem is beautiful. It paints a picture of how strong faith can still the fears and help with understanding. Your story in verse flows smoothly. I enjoyed reviewing it. The picture is a perfect compliment.
Cecilia
Comment Written 16-Apr-2022
Comment from Janet Foor
A thoughtful and encouraging poem that speaks to the heart.
The message is profound and yet in childlike faith, it is one we can all relate to.
Thank you for sharing and Happy Easter.
Janet
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A thoughtful and encouraging poem that speaks to the heart.
The message is profound and yet in childlike faith, it is one we can all relate to.
Thank you for sharing and Happy Easter.
Janet
Comment Written 16-Apr-2022
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I knew a Willie Smith. A Latter Day Saint in Boiling Springs, SC. But you aren't him. We have small connections. Nine years in the USN; three forays with the Coasties in Alaska doing weather soundings on-board Jarvis Whec Endurance cutter. The ship that ran aground off Dutch Harbor in '71. I boarded her TAD from a Coronado detachment to Sand Island, Hi her homeport. Oh, by the way. This is a very good piece of writing.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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I knew a Willie Smith. A Latter Day Saint in Boiling Springs, SC. But you aren't him. We have small connections. Nine years in the USN; three forays with the Coasties in Alaska doing weather soundings on-board Jarvis Whec Endurance cutter. The ship that ran aground off Dutch Harbor in '71. I boarded her TAD from a Coronado detachment to Sand Island, Hi her homeport. Oh, by the way. This is a very good piece of writing.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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Thank you for the compliment, Sounds like you and I have had a very busy life. Thanks also for the stars.
