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THE CURSE

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The six book of the Novels of the Breedline

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Comment from Mary Shifman
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This is a very intriguing scenario and I will definitely be interested in reading more. I really enjoy the Breedline series and plan to read them all once I get a little time. At the moment, I'm working on a sequel to the book I just published on Amazon so I'm kept pretty busy right now. Good luck with the new book.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
    Thank you, Mary :)
    Glad to hear you enjoyed this. I appreciate your positive feedback and generous stars.
    What is the name of your book? I'm interested in looking them up. BTW, I'm not sure if you know, but you can post your Amazon book details on FanStory. If anyone is interested, they can click on it and it will take them straight to your book on Amazon. I've got all mine listed.
    Thanks again!
    Sincerely,
    Shana :)
reply by Mary Shifman on 01-Oct-2021
    That sounds great. I just have to figure out how to do it. My book is called The Endless Song, subtitled The Soul Thief, and my pen name is Mariah McClain. You have to look it up under my name because there are other titles called The Endless Song.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
    Great! I will check it out :)
Comment from Justin Chopin
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Sounds like an amazing story. I think the parts you have about Shay falling in love with her rock n roll savior should be very interesting. I also thought the ideas you had about Shay's horror novels coming back to haunt her were very creative. Great work with this it kind of reminded me of the Rocky Horror picture show.

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
    Thanks Justin :)
    So glad you liked the idea. Now I'm excited to get started on this new book. I'm hoping to finish the one I'm working on before the new year. Thanks again for your feedback and generous stars!

    Sincerely,
    Shana :)
reply by Justin Chopin on 30-Sep-2021
    You're welcome.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Your description of your new novel sounds complex with many tangents to branch off to create the chapters. It sounds interesting with a good mix of characters. The setting will be an important concept, and I believe you will use that to great advantage. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
    Thank you, Jan :)
    Glad you liked it. It's nice to come up with new ideas for the next series. Now... I just need to finish The Curse. I appreciate your awesome review and generous stars.

    Sincerely,
    Shana :)
Comment from royowen
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Sounds like your inspired imagination is taking off again dear Shana, the literary tide which has swept you before it is doing so right now. My literary bent doesn't stray very far off course very long, because there's nothing wrong with where it's going anyway, and yours sounds Just as reliable. Yes my writing urges have to be turned off sometimes so the mundane, (which can't fix itself) is taken care of. Well done my friend, go for it. Well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
    Thank you, dear friend :)
    Glad you approve. I've gotten behind on my current book, so I thought why not get some feedback on the next one I plan to do. Work and life has been busy for me lately, but I hope to get enough writing this week for another chapter. I appreciate your encouragement and generous stars!

    Always you fan,
    Shana :)
reply by royowen on 28-Sep-2021
    Most welcome Shana, good luck
Comment from AJ McCall
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WOOOOOW! I love the summary! It's not too short and not too long. I think it's the perfect length and you tell just enough information because now I'm thinking back to all of the chapters I read. But I have to say, I was looking forward to a story post, lol, when I got the notification you put something up. But writer's block is never easy to overcome. Try looking at some writing prompts; those always get my juices flowing.

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
    Thank you, AJ :)
    Glad you liked my next book idea. Yeah, that vacation put me behind and last week was so busy. I just didn't have much time to write. I wanted to do some this weekend, but it was my boyfriend's birthday. Hopefully this week I can get back to the story. Thanks for the encouraging words and helpful advice. I appreciate it!

    Hugs,
    Shana :)
reply by AJ McCall on 27-Sep-2021
    Anytime Shana! You're welcome! Hey, birthdays before books, lol.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
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Captivating blurb--will surely attract interest!

Her [dreams=>DREAM] of becoming a best-selling author, finally comes true.

Shana Congrove tells the story of an aspiring writer, Shay Conrad--who [OMIT is] healing from a broken heart--suddenly finds her life changed forever.
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Shana Congrove tells the story of an aspiring writer, Shay Conrad, who--healing from a broken heart--suddenly finds her life changed forever.

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
    Oh, thank you, Elizabeth :)

    Glad you like the book description. And thanks so much for the helpful advice. I like your ideas.

    Sincerely,
    Shana :)
Comment from Zhen Xuan Liu
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Another great post today! I am totally captivated by this description of the upcoming novel. The last sentence left the readers on a cliff hanger, which I like a lot. Good job on this and I am excited to read the 7th book in the Breedline series.

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
    Thanks so much, Zhen :)
    Glad you liked it! This does encourage me. Hopefully I can start on this one as soon as I complete the sixth novel. Having an idea for another book is exciting. Your input helps.

    Sincerely,
    Shana :)
Comment from Sanku
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Oh My it is a terryfying cocktail of horrors. Sounds interesting.The title is also unique..Breedline stories.And this is the seventh book. You will be sharing it here in fanstory?

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
    Thank you, Sanku :)
    Glad you like it! I was hoping to get good feedback. As soon as I finish the sixth book I'm working on, I will go back and revise my first two books in this series. Then, I plan on diving into this story. Hopefully, I will beable to share here too. If not, you can follow me (Shana Congrove) on Amazon. That will give updates on all my new releases.

    Thanks again!
    Shana :)
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This Chapter of the Seventh Book, the Supernatural Science Fiction, speaks about nightmares/book blurb, however, the secret reveals; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
    Thanks so much, Alcreator :)

    Glad you liked it! It's nice to have new idea for a book. Now... I just need to finish the one I'm working on.

    Thank again!
    Sincerely,
    Shana :)