Things I Never Knew I Never Knew
Perspectives then and now25 total reviews
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer, (--wink--)
This is a smart, WISE, and lovely piece of writing. I like how you are able to look at these different family members and see their good traits and maybe, their not-so-good ones. None of us is perfect and we'd rather be seen with a bit of grace. Thanks and good luck!
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
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Dear Mystery Writer, (--wink--)
This is a smart, WISE, and lovely piece of writing. I like how you are able to look at these different family members and see their good traits and maybe, their not-so-good ones. None of us is perfect and we'd rather be seen with a bit of grace. Thanks and good luck!
Comment Written 27-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
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Thanks for your encouraging and kind review, Robyn! It is interesting to think back on life and see what bubbles up. I think we just do the best we can to carry on as we journey through this ol' life. I appreciate your taking the time to read my story! Sending well wishes.
Comment from Sherry Asbury
Very nice writing about memories! You brought us through so many time spans and the history of your family. Your picture was there for a reason and you fulfilled that reason admirably!!
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
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Very nice writing about memories! You brought us through so many time spans and the history of your family. Your picture was there for a reason and you fulfilled that reason admirably!!
Comment Written 27-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
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Dear Sherry, thanks so much for the kind review and encouraging words! It's an interesting journey to "travel back" and see what feelings and memories surface. I appreciate your taking time to read my story! Sending lots of good wishes.
Comment from royowen
It's all so sad, I'm glad I had a chance to right the ship, my mum and dad were divorced, I never met both my grandfathers, one died before I was born, the other had another family somewhere. We all have a chance to lead our children set an example, the good thing is you had a chance because of your mother's wonderful example, you saw love up close, the forgiveness and decision to see how love works close up. Beautifully written, we can all right the ship for the sake of others to come after us, that's sacrificial love, which is the only real love there is, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
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It's all so sad, I'm glad I had a chance to right the ship, my mum and dad were divorced, I never met both my grandfathers, one died before I was born, the other had another family somewhere. We all have a chance to lead our children set an example, the good thing is you had a chance because of your mother's wonderful example, you saw love up close, the forgiveness and decision to see how love works close up. Beautifully written, we can all right the ship for the sake of others to come after us, that's sacrificial love, which is the only real love there is, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 27-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
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Dear Roy, your review is beautiful! Thank you so much for taking the time to read my story. You are exactly right. I am so grateful for my mother. I have no complaints. We just do the best we can as we travel along this journey, even when life seems cruel and unfair. We sure do learn a lot!
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Well done
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
In this Biographical Non-Fiction you have tried to speak about the relation, somehow one had with other, and you could never even guess or understand the perspectives in courses of living; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
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In this Biographical Non-Fiction you have tried to speak about the relation, somehow one had with other, and you could never even guess or understand the perspectives in courses of living; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
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Comment Written 27-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
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Dear Alcreator, I appreciate your kind review so much. Thank you for taking the time to read my story. It is an interesting exercise to think back on your life and see things in a different perspective. We sure can learn a lot as we travel through this journey of mortality!
Comment from pookietoo
I love how you write this story and explain each lesson. The best of luck in this contest. Take care. Know that you are loved. Have a nice week. :) :) :)
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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
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I love how you write this story and explain each lesson. The best of luck in this contest. Take care. Know that you are loved. Have a nice week. :) :) :)
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Comment Written 27-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
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Thank you, Pookietoo! So great to hear from you. I appreciate you taking the time to read my story. I hoped the "lessons" would come across okay. I tried to pattern them after my Grandma's famous saying, "You just never know." We just do the best we can as we travel this mortal journey! Sending lots of well wishes to you.
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