walk softly
six word poem entry12 total reviews
Comment from Eternal Muse
Oh, this was so fun! Excellent use of six words, beautiful presentation and great imagery. I liked your artwork.
Best of luck in the contest, this should do well.
P.S. I like moccasins (smile).
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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
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Oh, this was so fun! Excellent use of six words, beautiful presentation and great imagery. I liked your artwork.
Best of luck in the contest, this should do well.
P.S. I like moccasins (smile).
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Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
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My moccasins are hard leather (-; THANKS for your review and compliments.
Comment from tfawcus
Nicely done. Not easy to make much of six words, but you've hinted at the stealthy of the hunter and the way of life of the indigenous American Indians. We have a lot to learn from them.
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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
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Nicely done. Not easy to make much of six words, but you've hinted at the stealthy of the hunter and the way of life of the indigenous American Indians. We have a lot to learn from them.
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Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
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I was thinking of the Native Americans walking through the forest when I wrote this short time - good observation! I do appreciate your final sentiment.
