Secrets in the Wind
Viewing comments for Chapter 61 "Secrets in the Wind - Chap 61"A story of loss, deceit, murder and crime
17 total reviews
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
Uh-oh! There's a little trouble in paradise. But I have a feeling that the lovebirds will work out this little misunderstanding. I'm thrilled that Liz wants to meet her sister, and the rest of her family. She'll especially need them, now that Jack is gone.
Just one small error:
Hank glanced at Emmy's chagrin face and pushed forward with the new topic.
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Hank glanced at Emmy's chagrined face and pushed forward with the new topic.
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I wonder what's in Mason's locker?
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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Uh-oh! There's a little trouble in paradise. But I have a feeling that the lovebirds will work out this little misunderstanding. I'm thrilled that Liz wants to meet her sister, and the rest of her family. She'll especially need them, now that Jack is gone.
Just one small error:
Hank glanced at Emmy's chagrin face and pushed forward with the new topic.
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Hank glanced at Emmy's chagrined face and pushed forward with the new topic.
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I wonder what's in Mason's locker?
Comment Written 28-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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Thanks so much for continuing to read. My apologies for being so far behind with thank yous. Life has a grip on me and keeps dragging me down.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Cogitator
Now, you've exhausted my different comments. Please continue with this developing story. I will follow along and enjoy. I question the number of characters needed to convey the dialogue...John
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
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Now, you've exhausted my different comments. Please continue with this developing story. I will follow along and enjoy. I question the number of characters needed to convey the dialogue...John
Comment Written 28-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
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We are reaching the end (maybe one or two chapters left) and each character has had a very important part through out. I needed to tie up all the loose ends and bring them all together.
Thank you = Carol
Comment from lancellot
This is well written. Like all mystery movies and novels ,after the drama and adventures are over, it is time for the reader and character debrief. These suppositions are standard, and you do a good job making theme a smooth conversation the readers want to follow.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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This is well written. Like all mystery movies and novels ,after the drama and adventures are over, it is time for the reader and character debrief. These suppositions are standard, and you do a good job making theme a smooth conversation the readers want to follow.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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My apologies for the delay in sending a thank you but life seems to have a gripping hold on me at the moment. I appreciate your kindness and your thoughts.
Always. Carol
Comment from robyn corum
Carol,
Yeah, right. There's nothing simple or easy in this story. hahaha Who knows what they're about to stumble on? I'm more than a little scared right now!!!!! YIKES!
A note:
--> Hank glanced at Emmy's chagrin(ed) face
And still moving on=
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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Carol,
Yeah, right. There's nothing simple or easy in this story. hahaha Who knows what they're about to stumble on? I'm more than a little scared right now!!!!! YIKES!
A note:
--> Hank glanced at Emmy's chagrin(ed) face
And still moving on=
Comment Written 27-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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My apologies for being so far behind on thank you's. I am struggling to get caught up while it is quiet here this morning.... One never knows when the next blow will come.
Hugs, CArol
Comment from karenina
Wow. This chapter reminded me just how many interwoven plots you've brought together! I'd completely forgotten about the Nurse! (My bad.)
Garth's being a little cranky pants about Allie!
My goodness! They've never only just begun!
My mind was whirling...I had to go back and slowly digest all that was happening...
Guess now that Annie is safe I'm ready for the next anticipated reunion of Liz and Faith!
I take the fact that you are writing as a good sign?
I hope so! Thinking good thoughts!
Karenina
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
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Wow. This chapter reminded me just how many interwoven plots you've brought together! I'd completely forgotten about the Nurse! (My bad.)
Garth's being a little cranky pants about Allie!
My goodness! They've never only just begun!
My mind was whirling...I had to go back and slowly digest all that was happening...
Guess now that Annie is safe I'm ready for the next anticipated reunion of Liz and Faith!
I take the fact that you are writing as a good sign?
I hope so! Thinking good thoughts!
Karenina
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
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Actually, Liz keeps asking me about the nurse... so I didn't have a chance to forget her. Go Liz!
I jumped out of my life in my characters and refused to go back until I wrote what I wanted. Of course, I can't see straight right now and I hope I did the story justice.... it was a good feeling while it lasted.
Hugs, Carol
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You did a fantastic job!
Karenina
Comment from Wendy G
Good to have this continuation. Threads are weaving together nicely. The writing is clear and the plot continues to be enjoyable. Many thanks.
Wendy
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Good to have this continuation. Threads are weaving together nicely. The writing is clear and the plot continues to be enjoyable. Many thanks.
Wendy
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Thanks so much, WEndy. I really appreciate the review and the feedback. Hugs, Carol
Comment from lyenochka
Well, Allie was quick to "join the team" but she didn't alert Garth to her trip. I hope she clarifies soon or else he'd feel it's an unbalanced relationship! It sounds like a lot of moving around of characters and resolution of loose ends coming up!
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Well, Allie was quick to "join the team" but she didn't alert Garth to her trip. I hope she clarifies soon or else he'd feel it's an unbalanced relationship! It sounds like a lot of moving around of characters and resolution of loose ends coming up!
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Yes, there is a lot of undercurrents being woven in for Book 4... It will become apparent soon. Thanks so much for the review.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from royowen
What a marvellous tying up of the relational side of the story, Liz gets to meet her sister, back in relationship with Mary, and a possible deal for Miguel and Sofia, who made a mistake in their choice of friends, although the loss of Jon was a blow, beautifully written Carol, blessings Roy
Note : I honestly though Garth, (NĂ©e Jeremy) in the last story was married, that's why he didn't respond to flirtations Carol.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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What a marvellous tying up of the relational side of the story, Liz gets to meet her sister, back in relationship with Mary, and a possible deal for Miguel and Sofia, who made a mistake in their choice of friends, although the loss of Jon was a blow, beautifully written Carol, blessings Roy
Note : I honestly though Garth, (NĂ©e Jeremy) in the last story was married, that's why he didn't respond to flirtations Carol.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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I wrote in here that Katherine had passed away a year ago.... It was just in conversation, so that you might have missed it. She had cancer, and he got emotional when he found out Faith did too. No problem!
Writing today really lifted my spirits...I guess all my pent-up emotions got tossed into my characters. I'm kind of sorry I let Jon die too. He really wanted to repent. There are one or two chapters left, and sadly it all comes to an end. Only to begin again..... lol
Thanks, Roy. As always, Carol...
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I?m so glad Carol, now you can rest. Those times can be barren, we sometimes think God has left, but He?s there all the time.
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Actually, I woke night before last and would have sworn my daughter was standing near by bed... I have felt so much calmer yesterday and today.
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There you go, an angelic visitor
Comment from Carol Clark2
Ooh, Allie and Garth working together now. Sounds like a good team. I hope Garth forgives Allie for not telling him she needs to check on her sister. Another good chapter. Time for Liz and Faith to meet. Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Ooh, Allie and Garth working together now. Sounds like a good team. I hope Garth forgives Allie for not telling him she needs to check on her sister. Another good chapter. Time for Liz and Faith to meet. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Allie thinks from the moment she went to prison to protect Cassidy, she became part of Garth's team whether he likes it or not. She's a spitfire and he'll have his hands full with her.
Hugs, Carol
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Yes, spitfire will make for some good conflict! Lol. :) Blessings. Carol
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Well, I certainly got it wrong when I thought the story was ending. There are so many changes coming to the fore and feelings that will be reeling. It's happening already and there's so much more.
Ralf
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Well, I certainly got it wrong when I thought the story was ending. There are so many changes coming to the fore and feelings that will be reeling. It's happening already and there's so much more.
Ralf
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Thanks, Ralf...
It's almost to the end...another chapter or two. I've loose ends to tie up and a few surprises here and there. Some lead in to the next book...
Hugs, Carol
