Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Dietary Restrictions
by Artasylum

Hahaha...I love zombies movies. Good syllables count but connection between lines can be improved. Good presentation.

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021

thanks

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

YUCK!!!! But it made for a good contest entry. I haven't watched a single episode of the "The Walking Dead" and don't plan to. My first graders would tell me about it. Good Luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021

Yuck indeed... you have to have a certain pallet for this lifestyle... hee.

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

Hello Diana,
Good to see you back on fanstory, and with a marvelous zombie 5-7-5 poem.
Nothing like the smell and taste of good old tartare sauce to whet the appetite.
Nice use imagery to arouse the senses.
Best wishes to all.
Robert

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021

hey kiddo.. it is so good to be back... I've missed my Fanstory pals a whole lot and so looking forward to writing.

Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan

Excellent

OMG! This is creepy, but delicious to people who live on rotting meat and coagulated blood. Is any menu card or do-it-yourself video available. Worth trying! This is a great sounding Zombie poem. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021

Yum... coagulating blood... must go eat... thanks so much for the five bloody stars.

Comment from Mama Baer

Excellent

OOOOO, very deliciously creepy! Fantastic image to accompany your "lovely" poem. A-n-d, the title is to "die" for, hehe. So very clever. Fun entry! I am glad I found your writings (I'm kind of new here).

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021

thanks you for your delectable review and your five bloody stars... what fun...

Comment from Mia Twysted

Excellent

You describe the undead with bold and powerful words, "Ravenous" and "Rotting." It is like a sandwich with zombie bread on the end and the dear brains he loves in the middle covered in that "warm blood."

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021

your description almost made me queasy yum... thanks for the fun review.

Comment from Kamrynn June

Excellent

Dear Author,

Very well done indeed. The artwork you've chosen makes this poem exceptionally terrifying! How long did it take you to come up with that combination of words? Truly impressive.

Good luck to you!
-K

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021

Thanks every so for the five bloody stars...!!!!

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Well, I have heard of "steak tartare" so I understand your allusion to the risky menu item. I guess this makes your zombie poem a little more lighthearted. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021

Thanks so for the 5 bloody stars...

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This zombie 5-7-5, Dietary Restrictions, has the required formatting and proves that one man's rotting flesh is another man's fine cuisine.

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021

thanks so much for the bloody five stars...

Comment from samantha0930

Excellent

I like your poem :) It feels humorous, and I especially like the last line.

It feels like you meant to have all the lines capitalized, but you missed the last line. The picture is kinda blurry though, and they look like aliens? Lol. Which is a little weird when it's supposed to be about zombies?

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021

Thanks for the five bloody stars LOL!