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A compliation of thoughts while having breakfast.

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Comment from SHABAMO
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Thanks for sharing another excellent poem commemorating God. I liked the salty as can be salty as the sea brine connection in the first half that then tied in again at the end.

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2021

reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
    Thanks SHABAMO.
    I enjoyed Priesthood class that Sabbath Sunday and while researching this subject?
    And, learning more about it.
    And, as our teacher and former past President.
    (Doctor Carey Penrod)
    Who is a retired surgeon continued with this.
    I would write a paragraph and then continue listening and learning and sharing.
    Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Sherry Asbury
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So clever...love the picture and I love salt, but must be careful with it.
You have made salt a hero here and done a fine job of writing. I thoroughly enjoyed this fine read!

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2021

reply by the author on 23-Sep-2021
    Tanks so much again Sherry for stopping by again.
    And, I'm happy to get you enjoyed this one.
    "Priesthood Class Rewrite"
    Doctor Ricky 1024