The Magic Bank Account
(A game...a prize...a gift)16 total reviews
Comment from knowledge
Very good construction on this poem. It also teaches a moral lesson. It even carries a rhythm. I really enjoyed it so much that I will give you 5 stars but I will promote it for you.
May Our Heavenly Family Bless You and Yours.
Your Friend, Danny
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
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Very good construction on this poem. It also teaches a moral lesson. It even carries a rhythm. I really enjoyed it so much that I will give you 5 stars but I will promote it for you.
May Our Heavenly Family Bless You and Yours.
Your Friend, Danny
Comment Written 28-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much, Danny, for the 5-star review. I'm so happy that you enjoyed The Magic Bank Account and its message. Thank you once again and have a beautiful day!
Comment from pookietoo
Thus was a nice entry in the rhyming contest. Keep up the great work writing your poems. I really enjoy writing poems. Enjoy life and keep smiling. :)
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
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Thus was a nice entry in the rhyming contest. Keep up the great work writing your poems. I really enjoy writing poems. Enjoy life and keep smiling. :)
Comment Written 28-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
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Thank you so very much for reviewing The Magic Bank Account and for your kind words. I had fun turning the original story into poetic form and am so happy that you enjoyed! Thank you once again and have a wonderful day!
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Comment from Chrissy710
Without a doubt Mini a six star poem 'I love this and will bookcase it also
What a terrific poem and wise, I have never counted the seconds i a day but now i know how much I have, each day. Your creative words. presentation and rhyme is spot on. A terrific read for me. All the best in the contest. This should win hand's down. Cheers Christine
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Without a doubt Mini a six star poem 'I love this and will bookcase it also
What a terrific poem and wise, I have never counted the seconds i a day but now i know how much I have, each day. Your creative words. presentation and rhyme is spot on. A terrific read for me. All the best in the contest. This should win hand's down. Cheers Christine
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much, Christine, for the lovely words about The Magic Bank Account! When I had read the original story, I, too, did not realize the number of seconds we have each day (and did multiply it out myself). I am so happy that you enjoyed and want to thank you once again! Have a wonderful day!
Comment from miajaffri
Well done. I felt like I was reading a story and wanted to keep going to
see where it was taking me. It tells a very good lesson in poetic form.
It has a good flow. During the reading I didn't notice the rhymes. On
a second look. I see they are there.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Well done. I felt like I was reading a story and wanted to keep going to
see where it was taking me. It tells a very good lesson in poetic form.
It has a good flow. During the reading I didn't notice the rhymes. On
a second look. I see they are there.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much for the kind review of The Magic Bank Account! I'm so glad that you enjoyed. Thank you again and enjoy the rest of the weekend!
Comment from karenina
Well wortjy of a six, of which I have none.
Your Meter and rhyme are exceptional! I could toe tap every line! The clever tale hooked me by the end of second verse...and on you went to show that wealth is NOT found in a purse! I've taken your words well to heart...there have been some painful days... But eighty six thousand four hundred seconds! I must spend in hopeful ways!
Karenina
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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Well wortjy of a six, of which I have none.
Your Meter and rhyme are exceptional! I could toe tap every line! The clever tale hooked me by the end of second verse...and on you went to show that wealth is NOT found in a purse! I've taken your words well to heart...there have been some painful days... But eighty six thousand four hundred seconds! I must spend in hopeful ways!
Karenina
Comment Written 25-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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Thank you so very much for the wonderful review and am so happy to know that my approach to the tale caught your attention from the beginning. The original story of The Magic Bank Account was filled with such meaning that I wanted to try to turn it into poetic form. Thank you again for your kind words and have a beautiful weekend!
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A wonderful read! I thoroughly enjoyed it!
Thanks, you have a great weekend as well!
Karenina
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Wow this is such a wonderful write and really does deserve six stars, but I am out of them just now. What a wonderful way of describing the gift of life and how we often take it for granted and fail to spend our hours wisely. Life is short and should live each to to the full and appreciate every second, an uplifting, skilfully written poem that brought much joy to me today, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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Wow this is such a wonderful write and really does deserve six stars, but I am out of them just now. What a wonderful way of describing the gift of life and how we often take it for granted and fail to spend our hours wisely. Life is short and should live each to to the full and appreciate every second, an uplifting, skilfully written poem that brought much joy to me today, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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Hi, Dolly! Thank you so very much for the lovely review of The Magic Bank Account and your thoughtful and kind words about its meaning. The original story (from note found in the Coach's wallet) resonated with me to try to capture it in poetic form. Thank you once again and sending my best to you for a beautiful weekend!
Comment from l.raven
WOW!!! Hi Mimi, what an awesome story told sweet girl...
grandpa was a very wise man...and the words that stay with me...are money doesn't make you rich...and life is a precious gift of time...
I so love your story/poem told...and your picture...perrrrfect...so very well written...
I so sorry I don't have a six...this deserves it...well done...love you...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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WOW!!! Hi Mimi, what an awesome story told sweet girl...
grandpa was a very wise man...and the words that stay with me...are money doesn't make you rich...and life is a precious gift of time...
I so love your story/poem told...and your picture...perrrrfect...so very well written...
I so sorry I don't have a six...this deserves it...well done...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 24-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much, Raven, for the dear review of my poetic version of The Magic Bank Account! I'm so happy that you enjoyed the story and found its message so meaningful. Thank you again and sending my best for a beautiful weekend!
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your so very welcome...and you have a beautiful weekend as well...love xxoo
Comment from Anne Johnston
"Money doesn't make you rich, life's worth's unmeasured cost
Spend all your seconds wisely for you can't bring back time lost"
What a great poem you have written describing how important it is to treasure each day and use it wisely.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
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"Money doesn't make you rich, life's worth's unmeasured cost
Spend all your seconds wisely for you can't bring back time lost"
What a great poem you have written describing how important it is to treasure each day and use it wisely.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much, Anne, for such a lovely review of The Magic Bank Account. I am so happy that you enjoyed. Thank you again and have a beautiful weekend!
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You are welcome, Mimi
Comment from Paul McFarland
A fine poetic adaption to the story. This poem offers up some of the best advice a youngster could be given. Very interesting that "Bear" Bryant carried it with him.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
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A fine poetic adaption to the story. This poem offers up some of the best advice a youngster could be given. Very interesting that "Bear" Bryant carried it with him.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
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Thank you, Paul, for the wonderful review! I'm so happy that you enjoyed. It was an interesting story about the Coach - I read the story somewhere over a year ago and just kept thinking in my mind that it might be recreated into poetry form. Thank you again and have a wonderful weekend!
Comment from Sherry Asbury
What an intriguing story! Bear Bryant is a hero to me and this is a fine tribute to a legend. There is great wisdom here - on money and life. Excellent work here. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
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What an intriguing story! Bear Bryant is a hero to me and this is a fine tribute to a legend. There is great wisdom here - on money and life. Excellent work here. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much, Sherry, for your kinds words on my poetic version of The Magic Bank Account. The Coach must have been an amazing person. Thank you again and have a beautiful weekend!
