Just a dream
If only ...8 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This senryu, Just a Dream, presented with a 5-7-5 formatting, makes the observation that peace is always the goal but should never be expected to be the final reality in this life.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
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This senryu, Just a Dream, presented with a 5-7-5 formatting, makes the observation that peace is always the goal but should never be expected to be the final reality in this life.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2021
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Many thanks
Comment from Patty Palmer
It might be just a dream. world peace. If you don't dream about it and how it might be accomplished, then there will never be a chance for it to happen. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2021
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It might be just a dream. world peace. If you don't dream about it and how it might be accomplished, then there will never be a chance for it to happen. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
Comment Written 23-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2021
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Many thanks
Comment from Wendy G
It is a dream, but it will become a reality one day ... when men's hearts are changed. Well written Senryu, and excellent image. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2021
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It is a dream, but it will become a reality one day ... when men's hearts are changed. Well written Senryu, and excellent image. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 23-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2021
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Many thanks
Comment from Mary Shifman
I understand your sentiment. We pray for world peace but it is like paddling against the wind. There are so many forces and so much dark energy in the way that it's acts like a shield that prevents any real possibility of peace coming to fruition. Still we continue to pray and we hope. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021
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I understand your sentiment. We pray for world peace but it is like paddling against the wind. There are so many forces and so much dark energy in the way that it's acts like a shield that prevents any real possibility of peace coming to fruition. Still we continue to pray and we hope. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021
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Many thanks Mary
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You are very welcome,
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is such a touching poem. Simple, yet effective. And the artwork you have chosen sets off your emotional landscape perfectly. Well done! and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021
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This is such a touching poem. Simple, yet effective. And the artwork you have chosen sets off your emotional landscape perfectly. Well done! and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021
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Many thanks Katherine
Comment from Mimi Linny
Nicely written Senryu piece of poetry on prayers for world peace, but with quite a sad conclusion. The photo you have chosen of Mother Theresa is beautiful.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021
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Nicely written Senryu piece of poetry on prayers for world peace, but with quite a sad conclusion. The photo you have chosen of Mother Theresa is beautiful.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021
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Many thanks Linny
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A poignant write and the world will never be at peace as there are always those who want to upset the apple cart, we see them in the classrooms and in the workplace and in the pubs, there are those who are disruptive and those who live in peace, a poignant write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021
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A poignant write and the world will never be at peace as there are always those who want to upset the apple cart, we see them in the classrooms and in the workplace and in the pubs, there are those who are disruptive and those who live in peace, a poignant write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021
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You are so right Dolly. Thanks.
Comment from Carlos' girl
Beautiful poem such a perfect image to illustrate it as well. If only...but if enough of us pray, maybe this dream will come true. A dreamy poem indeed. I Love the title.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021
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Beautiful poem such a perfect image to illustrate it as well. If only...but if enough of us pray, maybe this dream will come true. A dreamy poem indeed. I Love the title.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much.
