In Dew's Time...
One Line Poem51 total reviews
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
It's so pretty. We're hoping to go to Yellowstone next year. I'm so excited to embrace everything that nature has to offer out there. It's important to embrace the stuff I currently have though. This is what you reminded me of. :)
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It's so pretty. We're hoping to go to Yellowstone next year. I'm so excited to embrace everything that nature has to offer out there. It's important to embrace the stuff I currently have though. This is what you reminded me of. :)
Comment Written 22-Sep-2021
Comment from poetichrt88
It reminds me in due time plants die but seeds are replanted showing it's beauty every season. Also tells me as plants grow and seasons change, they bloom when they are ready. I enjoyed reading this poem. It was interesting. It doesn't need work.
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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021
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It reminds me in due time plants die but seeds are replanted showing it's beauty every season. Also tells me as plants grow and seasons change, they bloom when they are ready. I enjoyed reading this poem. It was interesting. It doesn't need work.
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Comment Written 22-Sep-2021
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Comment from June Sargent
These words of wisdom can be applied to life in general. With time and patience, all good things come to fruition - whether they're flowers in our garden or dreams in our heart. I like the play on words - in dew's time. Just nourish those dreams with dewdrops of hope...
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These words of wisdom can be applied to life in general. With time and patience, all good things come to fruition - whether they're flowers in our garden or dreams in our heart. I like the play on words - in dew's time. Just nourish those dreams with dewdrops of hope...
Comment Written 22-Sep-2021
Comment from nomi338
The way that God handles our natural environment is truly remarkable. The seasons change on schedule, decline of growth in Autumn, freeze your buns in Winter, rebirth in Spring, and then burn your buns in Summer. Perfect.
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The way that God handles our natural environment is truly remarkable. The seasons change on schedule, decline of growth in Autumn, freeze your buns in Winter, rebirth in Spring, and then burn your buns in Summer. Perfect.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2021
Comment from nancy_e_davis
The bottom picture is a feast for hungry eyes. I simple adore lovely flowers and pink is my favorite color. How beautiful they are. Thank you for sharing. Good job, Diane. Nancy:)
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The bottom picture is a feast for hungry eyes. I simple adore lovely flowers and pink is my favorite color. How beautiful they are. Thank you for sharing. Good job, Diane. Nancy:)
Comment Written 22-Sep-2021
Comment from Begin Again
Beautiful! The Tiny little dew drops bring refreshing growth to the budding flowers and they blossom into God's extravagant gift of beauty. Perfectly said as a one line poem.
Smiles, Carol
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Beautiful! The Tiny little dew drops bring refreshing growth to the budding flowers and they blossom into God's extravagant gift of beauty. Perfectly said as a one line poem.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 22-Sep-2021
Comment from Pearl Edwards
A lovely one line poem and well thought out.
In dew's time - love that phrasing and beautiful photos to compliment your words. Good luck in the contest. Cheers
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A lovely one line poem and well thought out.
In dew's time - love that phrasing and beautiful photos to compliment your words. Good luck in the contest. Cheers
Comment Written 22-Sep-2021
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The morning dew is always a fine quenching for our plants, the condensation absorbed by our garden and the fresh smells in the morning, fine words, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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The morning dew is always a fine quenching for our plants, the condensation absorbed by our garden and the fresh smells in the morning, fine words, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Sep-2021
Comment from Hitcher
It does indeed : )) Spring is just arriving here in NZ and the buds are bursting to blossom and offer up the exquisite splendor your one lined poem is referring to. Good luck with this one, very nice!
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It does indeed : )) Spring is just arriving here in NZ and the buds are bursting to blossom and offer up the exquisite splendor your one lined poem is referring to. Good luck with this one, very nice!
Comment Written 22-Sep-2021
Comment from Teri7
Diane, This is a very beautiful and very well written and well worded one line poem you have penned for the contest. You used great descriptive words and lovely imagery. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
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Diane, This is a very beautiful and very well written and well worded one line poem you have penned for the contest. You used great descriptive words and lovely imagery. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 21-Sep-2021
