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In Dew's Time...

One Line Poem

51 total reviews 
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
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Clever line of poetry in the middle of the two images which it links up. I adore roses and rose is one of my favourite perfumes. I enjoyed reading this work very much, Giddy

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2021

Comment from T B Botts
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Hello Diane,
What a lovely one line poem. I loved the flowers. Are the roses from your garden or elsewhere? It's amazing how so few words can express so much. As always, well done. Have a blessed evening.

Tom

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2021

Comment from Kamrynn June
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Dear Mrs. KT,

Once again, you have impressed me with your love of nature and poetry. Are these roses from your garden? They are so beautiful! Very lovely and short piece. Always look forward to these!

-K

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2021

Comment from Janice Canerdy
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The words of your one-line poem are well-chosen, to present a lovely view of spring, nature at work. Clever variation on the expression "in due time." Great artwork

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2021

Comment from Katie Mae Dead
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This is a stunning one line poem! You've made such perfect use of the fact that you have only line to work with.
You've even got a nice rhyme in the word "renders" and "splendor" although I half expected to see the the word splendors.
This is the one to beat! Good luck!
Bookcasing this one for further study.
Be well,
Katiemae Dead

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2021

Comment from l.raven
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Hi Diane, Oh how roses love water...love the feel of
dew in the morning...God is sooooo good to us...in all He
gives us...

I love your beautiful poem my sweet friend...and love your
stunning pictures...so very nicely written sweet girl...love you...Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2021

Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
Exceptional
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This is a beautifully written one line poem. What a lovely overall presentation. I love your photo compliments your words so well. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021
    Hello Joanne!
    I am honored by your exceptional rating and complimentary review!
    Such a small offering, but I surely enjoyed penning it as I thought about the beauty and passing of the seasons...

    Thank you!
    diane
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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The images are beautiful. The sentence is telling how exquisites the roses are before they bud and after they are done budding and blossoming.

There is always a warm feeling when you see beautiful flowers.

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2021

Comment from LJbutterfly
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With just one line, this poem is skillfully composed, playing on words. In due time seasons change. Natural outdoor growth changes in "dew's" time. Your chosen artwork pairs perfectly with the imagery of your poetry.

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2021

Comment from dragonpoet
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Hey Diane
I like
the metaphor and pun in this poem. It is so true.
You chose great artwork to illustrate your poem
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2021