In Dew's Time...
One Line Poem51 total reviews
Comment from judiverse
"Dew's time" is an interesting phrase. Your thought flows together so smoothly in this. Bonus touch of rhyme with renders and splendor. Your artwork choices give a beautiful example of exquisite splendor. Good luck in the contest. judi
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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"Dew's time" is an interesting phrase. Your thought flows together so smoothly in this. Bonus touch of rhyme with renders and splendor. Your artwork choices give a beautiful example of exquisite splendor. Good luck in the contest. judi
Comment Written 24-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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Thank you, Judi!
So pleased you enjoyed!
diane
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You're very welcome. I need to give you credit for the clever pun. Dew's time--Due time. Got it! judi
Comment from pharp
Diane,
You have penned a perfect one-liner and shared the beauty of God's nature in this delightful poem. I like how you used "In Dew's time."
Oustanding presentation; I can see this as a winner...it is in my eyes.
Thanks for sharing your talent and blessed gift. The very best to you in the contest.
Have a great weekend.
Hugs...Portia
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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Diane,
You have penned a perfect one-liner and shared the beauty of God's nature in this delightful poem. I like how you used "In Dew's time."
Oustanding presentation; I can see this as a winner...it is in my eyes.
Thanks for sharing your talent and blessed gift. The very best to you in the contest.
Have a great weekend.
Hugs...Portia
Comment Written 24-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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Thank you, Portia!
So pleased my few words resonated with you!
Thank you!
diane
Comment from Sanku
These are lovely photographs .The dew drops on the green leaves sparkle.No doubt the dew drops are natures way to create beauty. They just raise one's spirits all the best for the contest
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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These are lovely photographs .The dew drops on the green leaves sparkle.No doubt the dew drops are natures way to create beauty. They just raise one's spirits all the best for the contest
Comment Written 24-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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Thank you, Sanku!
diane
Comment from angel123
You penned a beautiful one-line poem. Your artwork choice enhanced your message of beautiful flowers. I your double meaning of the phase "In dew time." I found that to be clever writing. Best wishes!
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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You penned a beautiful one-line poem. Your artwork choice enhanced your message of beautiful flowers. I your double meaning of the phase "In dew time." I found that to be clever writing. Best wishes!
Comment Written 24-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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Hello Angel!
I am honored by your exceptional rating and complimentary review!
Wanted to reply earlier this evening, but rec'd a message that the site was down for maintenance! Goodness!
So pleased you enjoyed!
Thank you!
diane
Comment from Anne Johnston
I love it. Beautiful pictures of the tiny rosebud, which opens up to such a beautiful flower. I like "Dew's time." Roses certainly are one of God's great creations for our enjoyment. I like the suggestion of being patient waiting for the best to unfold.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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I love it. Beautiful pictures of the tiny rosebud, which opens up to such a beautiful flower. I like "Dew's time." Roses certainly are one of God's great creations for our enjoyment. I like the suggestion of being patient waiting for the best to unfold.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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Thank you, Anne!
I am honored by your exceptional rating and thoughtful review.
Wanted to respond earlier, but I was foiled by life and a message from FanStory that the site was down for site maintenance! Goodness!
Thank you again!
Hoping you are fine and well!
diane
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You are welcome.
Comment from MissMerri
Awwww... How cute this is... In dew's time, is such a perfect title and makes a most delightful poem, Diane. It is beautifully presented with your two pictures and even has lovely internal rhyme! I really hope this is a winner in the one-line poem contest. I like everything about it. MM
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Awwww... How cute this is... In dew's time, is such a perfect title and makes a most delightful poem, Diane. It is beautifully presented with your two pictures and even has lovely internal rhyme! I really hope this is a winner in the one-line poem contest. I like everything about it. MM
Comment Written 23-Sep-2021
Comment from roof35
Lovely, lovely poem. You certainly have a way with words. Every time I read one of your posts I salute your talent. Your pictures, of course, match perfectly with your words.
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Lovely, lovely poem. You certainly have a way with words. Every time I read one of your posts I salute your talent. Your pictures, of course, match perfectly with your words.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2021
Comment from Senyai
Hi Diane,
Oh this is so beautiful! Love the play on words "in dew's time" - excellent!
Your monostitch poem is excellent and the photographs enhance your lovely words. Makes me long for spring instead of the fall...
Btw, thank you again for sending me the instructions on how to post an image in the body of a poem. It works! Now if I can just learn what all those squiggly little symbols are near the little 2 mountain icon are, I'll be computer savvy on FanStory! Ahh, but that's for another day...
Thanks again and have a great day, Diane :))
Always,
Senyai
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Hi Diane,
Oh this is so beautiful! Love the play on words "in dew's time" - excellent!
Your monostitch poem is excellent and the photographs enhance your lovely words. Makes me long for spring instead of the fall...
Btw, thank you again for sending me the instructions on how to post an image in the body of a poem. It works! Now if I can just learn what all those squiggly little symbols are near the little 2 mountain icon are, I'll be computer savvy on FanStory! Ahh, but that's for another day...
Thanks again and have a great day, Diane :))
Always,
Senyai
Comment Written 23-Sep-2021
Comment from Jasmine Girl
This poem is beautiful, especially accompanied by two very nice photos. Yes. Rose buds do turn into roses in late spring or early summer, especially after a rain fall.
Well done.
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This poem is beautiful, especially accompanied by two very nice photos. Yes. Rose buds do turn into roses in late spring or early summer, especially after a rain fall.
Well done.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2021
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
So much beautiful imagery created in one line! Remarkable power of expression. The accompanying pictures add beauty to your words and the short one-line poem rich. Good luck in the contest! Bravo!
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So much beautiful imagery created in one line! Remarkable power of expression. The accompanying pictures add beauty to your words and the short one-line poem rich. Good luck in the contest! Bravo!
Comment Written 23-Sep-2021
