Guilt
Guilt can do evil to a person.3 total reviews
Comment from writer723
I really enjoyed your spooky and creepy tale. It fits the Halloween theme perfectly in my opinion. I found myself instantly drawn in and on the edge of my seat. You skillfully wove this tale together with cleverness and perfect pacing. Thank you for providing such an intriguing read.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2021
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I really enjoyed your spooky and creepy tale. It fits the Halloween theme perfectly in my opinion. I found myself instantly drawn in and on the edge of my seat. You skillfully wove this tale together with cleverness and perfect pacing. Thank you for providing such an intriguing read.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2021
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Thank you for taking the time to read, review and for your encouraging comments. Greatly appreciated.
Comment from blondie560
Pretty graphic for 50 words! It definitely could be expanded for a bigger short story! You did a good job presenting a horror story. I wish you luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021
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Pretty graphic for 50 words! It definitely could be expanded for a bigger short story! You did a good job presenting a horror story. I wish you luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021
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Thanks for the read and the feedback. Much appreciated.
Comment from lancellot
Well, there is a limit of fifty words, so there is only so much that can be said. If this we get the righteous revenge angle.
note:
"Now I'm satisfied, she says."
- should be-
"Now I'm satisfied," she says.
Just move over to the left.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021
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Well, there is a limit of fifty words, so there is only so much that can be said. If this we get the righteous revenge angle.
note:
"Now I'm satisfied, she says."
- should be-
"Now I'm satisfied," she says.
Just move over to the left.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021
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Thanks for the read and the catch. Appreciate your feedback.
