Autumn Joy
A glorious time of the year.2 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image
and presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-Autumn is a lovely time of year,
and you show what is special about it.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2021
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-Very nice image
and presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-Autumn is a lovely time of year,
and you show what is special about it.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2021
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Thanks for the read and review. Appreciated.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Eternal Muse
This is such an enjoyable Naani. I love autumn, and you did it justice with your beautifully presented poem. You fit volumes into these 4 lines, the visuals are amazing.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2021
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This is such an enjoyable Naani. I love autumn, and you did it justice with your beautifully presented poem. You fit volumes into these 4 lines, the visuals are amazing.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2021
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Thank you for the read, review and your kind comments. Appreciated.
