Prayer is the Key
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Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Kace, lovely poem well written with consistent aabb rhyme - suits my mood. Wednesday I go to hospital for operation to find the cause of fluid accumulating in my left lung. First they removed one litre of fluid, then this time one and a half litres. Can't believe a lung could hold that much. They are aiming to find out the cause which could be connected to one of the many organs in the body at fault. Not looking forward to it but need to get it over with. Keep smiling. Love Dorothy xxx
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021
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Hi Kace, lovely poem well written with consistent aabb rhyme - suits my mood. Wednesday I go to hospital for operation to find the cause of fluid accumulating in my left lung. First they removed one litre of fluid, then this time one and a half litres. Can't believe a lung could hold that much. They are aiming to find out the cause which could be connected to one of the many organs in the body at fault. Not looking forward to it but need to get it over with. Keep smiling. Love Dorothy xxx
Comment Written 19-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021
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Thanks for reading my friend. I know you wholeheartedly agree with my words. Prayers for you on Wed. Love, Kace xx and a big slurp from Benny dog!
Comment from mermaids
Excellent words for our times. Humans are so greedy and we need to change our ways and turn back to God. Your words give a warning that should be taken seriously. Excellent poetic flow and use of words.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021
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Excellent words for our times. Humans are so greedy and we need to change our ways and turn back to God. Your words give a warning that should be taken seriously. Excellent poetic flow and use of words.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021
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Thank you Elaine. Time is ticking and we have to go through the rot of the world before He cleanses us. Love, Kay xx
Comment from Janetsue
It is never too late for a revival with prayer from faithful hearts. However, these are troubling times and there are many who want a new world order to take place. It is all foretold and I look up to Heaven for comfort. I think this is a powerful posting, Kay.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021
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It is never too late for a revival with prayer from faithful hearts. However, these are troubling times and there are many who want a new world order to take place. It is all foretold and I look up to Heaven for comfort. I think this is a powerful posting, Kay.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021
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Thank you my friend. I fear it echoes Hitler on the rise. Dramatic, yes, feasible? The battle between good and evil is raging and the innocents are suffering. Bless you my friend K XX
Comment from royowen
The wonderful thing Kay, is that we know who it is that is the only hope, the only way to Heaven and eternity is the Lord Jesus Christ, who through His shed blood and sacrifice that gave us life, beautifully written my friend, an excellent poem, revealing your ability, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021
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The wonderful thing Kay, is that we know who it is that is the only hope, the only way to Heaven and eternity is the Lord Jesus Christ, who through His shed blood and sacrifice that gave us life, beautifully written my friend, an excellent poem, revealing your ability, blessings Roy
Comment Written 19-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021
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I tried to write simply for those who have never heard of The Book of Revelation. There is still time for them to turn to Jesus for forgiveness! We live in joyful hope awaiting His glory. Love in Christ. K xx
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Well done
Comment from Ricky1024
"Prayer is the Key"
I like the title to this and being that I am a Latter-Day Saint priest with the Church of Jesus Christ and it is Sabbath Sunday.
This works well with me.
It's something that the Jehovah witnesses seem to constantly push.
The coming of Doom and Gloom but the eventual convenience of having above.
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This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021
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"Prayer is the Key"
I like the title to this and being that I am a Latter-Day Saint priest with the Church of Jesus Christ and it is Sabbath Sunday.
This works well with me.
It's something that the Jehovah witnesses seem to constantly push.
The coming of Doom and Gloom but the eventual convenience of having above.
...
This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
...
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Check out my latest post.
And, thank you.
You may enjoy it and it's
Entitled,
"Analyzing Fear and Death"
Doctor Ricky 1024
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021
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Ricky, Thanks for reading and agreeing. We have to pass through the mill before we witness His glory. None is without sin, no not one.
May the Lord bless and keep you, make his Son to shine upon you and give you peace. Blessings from Oz. Kay xx
