Interplanetary Plant
5-7-5 Entry7 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
They are beautiful flowers and well named for their moonlight glow. Your image is beautiful, and your 5-7-5 does justice to them. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
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They are beautiful flowers and well named for their moonlight glow. Your image is beautiful, and your 5-7-5 does justice to them. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 20-Sep-2021
Comment from Mama Baer
Clever title to this beautiful 5-7-5 full of imagery and carefully selected words. I think moonflowers are beautiful, and you described them with articulation and intrigue. And the photo is breathtaking! Superb contest entry.
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Clever title to this beautiful 5-7-5 full of imagery and carefully selected words. I think moonflowers are beautiful, and you described them with articulation and intrigue. And the photo is breathtaking! Superb contest entry.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2021
Comment from Mimi Linny
Sweet 5-7-5 poetry piece about the beautiful Moonflower petals... Love the tweak of rhyming in 2nd and 3rd lines. Nicely put together and pretty photo to accompany the poem!
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Sweet 5-7-5 poetry piece about the beautiful Moonflower petals... Love the tweak of rhyming in 2nd and 3rd lines. Nicely put together and pretty photo to accompany the poem!
Comment Written 19-Sep-2021
Comment from zanya
Wow! what a beautiful display these flowers provide with their 'petals' that 'shine bright', effectively lighting up the world through the night -thanks for sharing
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Wow! what a beautiful display these flowers provide with their 'petals' that 'shine bright', effectively lighting up the world through the night -thanks for sharing
Comment Written 19-Sep-2021
Comment from SHABAMO
Not at all what I expected given the title, but it makes total sense! The moon does have a unique and wonderful effect of fauna at times. Great haiku and use of your syllables
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Not at all what I expected given the title, but it makes total sense! The moon does have a unique and wonderful effect of fauna at times. Great haiku and use of your syllables
Comment Written 19-Sep-2021
Comment from Eternal Muse
What a beautiful 5-7-5. I love flowers, and your words really appeased me. Great imagery, visuals and artistic presentation make it a delight to read.
I wish you all the luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2021
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What a beautiful 5-7-5. I love flowers, and your words really appeased me. Great imagery, visuals and artistic presentation make it a delight to read.
I wish you all the luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2021
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Thanks for your review. Dad used to grow these and they looked beautiful at night.
Comment from Mary Shifman
This is a charming poem about an amazing plant. We were on a road trip the first time I saw them and there was a huge patch of them, glowing so brightly in the moonlight. I planted some one but they never made it. I enjoyed your poem. Good luck in the contest,
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2021
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This is a charming poem about an amazing plant. We were on a road trip the first time I saw them and there was a huge patch of them, glowing so brightly in the moonlight. I planted some one but they never made it. I enjoyed your poem. Good luck in the contest,
Comment Written 19-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2021
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Thanks for your review. My Dad used to grow them and they looked beautiful at night.
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You are so welcome.
