Come Walk With Me
A Swap Quatrain for Potlatch Poetry19 total reviews
Comment from Anne Johnston
How I would love to walk with you through this beautiful path, enjoying all the things you have described. A beautiful poem and so fitting for this time of year. By the way, a belated Happy Birthday. Hope you had a great one.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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How I would love to walk with you through this beautiful path, enjoying all the things you have described. A beautiful poem and so fitting for this time of year. By the way, a belated Happy Birthday. Hope you had a great one.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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Oh, I did. Thank you so much!
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You are welcome
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
A magnificent presentation in this perfect form. Your art is exquisite!
The beauty of Autumn is unsurpassed in other seasons, even though they too are filled with beauty.
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!
Ralf
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2021
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A magnificent presentation in this perfect form. Your art is exquisite!
The beauty of Autumn is unsurpassed in other seasons, even though they too are filled with beauty.
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!
Ralf
Comment Written 23-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much for the birthday wishes. I really appreciate that. I'm so happy you enjoyed my poem.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
a butterfly ballet - I love that description Yvonne, in your lovely, descriptive walk in the woodlands. Great rhyming and phrasing -
kaleidoscopic avalanche - in your swap quatrain. Lovely presentation.
cheers, valda
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2021
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a butterfly ballet - I love that description Yvonne, in your lovely, descriptive walk in the woodlands. Great rhyming and phrasing -
kaleidoscopic avalanche - in your swap quatrain. Lovely presentation.
cheers, valda
Comment Written 23-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much. I hope you are doing well. It's finally becoming autumn here, and I'm soooo glad!
Comment from Sally Law
This is simply marvelous, dear Yvonne. The is no end to your talent and no form foreign to you, not for long anyway. Beautifully penned in swap quatrain.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for challenge,
Sal XOs...
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021
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This is simply marvelous, dear Yvonne. The is no end to your talent and no form foreign to you, not for long anyway. Beautifully penned in swap quatrain.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for challenge,
Sal XOs...
Comment Written 22-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much. You've made me feel like a million dollars! 8-)
Comment from lyenochka
Ah, I imagined this walk with you, dear Yvonne! You would draw my attention to every magical detail among bugs, bird, and plants! My favorite line was "kaleidoscopic avalanche."
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2021
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Ah, I imagined this walk with you, dear Yvonne! You would draw my attention to every magical detail among bugs, bird, and plants! My favorite line was "kaleidoscopic avalanche."
Comment Written 19-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2021
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Thank you. That was my favorite, too. Thanks for the stars, too!
Comment from aryr
I loved the picture of the leaves turning the multitude of colors and the visible twisting road, damommy. This was a great swap quatrain that definitely dealt with the finds of nature, it was perfect. Very well done and greatly enjoyed.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2021
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I loved the picture of the leaves turning the multitude of colors and the visible twisting road, damommy. This was a great swap quatrain that definitely dealt with the finds of nature, it was perfect. Very well done and greatly enjoyed.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2021
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Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from judiverse
Lovely swap lines. You did an excellent job with them and the rhyme. This sounds so inviting, with the beautiful fall leaves, the creek, maybe a fox. The imagery is very appealing--the butterfly ballet, the kaleidoscopic avalanche. Altogether visually stunning. I wish there had been more contrast between the black font and the background color. judi
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2021
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Lovely swap lines. You did an excellent job with them and the rhyme. This sounds so inviting, with the beautiful fall leaves, the creek, maybe a fox. The imagery is very appealing--the butterfly ballet, the kaleidoscopic avalanche. Altogether visually stunning. I wish there had been more contrast between the black font and the background color. judi
Comment Written 19-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2021
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Thank you for this wonderful review. I'm sorry if the font and background were a problem for you. I appreciate that you reviewed it anyway. 8-)
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You're very welcome. judi
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Yvonne.
Your picture complements the fine poem you have written. As you know, I don't pay attention much to style, but I'm sure you have met the swap quatrain rules in structure.
Well done, and a pleasant read. I particularly like the butterfly ballet.
Robert
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2021
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Hello Yvonne.
Your picture complements the fine poem you have written. As you know, I don't pay attention much to style, but I'm sure you have met the swap quatrain rules in structure.
Well done, and a pleasant read. I particularly like the butterfly ballet.
Robert
Comment Written 19-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2021
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Thank you. I always appreciate your input.
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You're welcome.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Another lovely Swap Quatrain in the offering this morning. A repeat which is not really a repeat . It just seems to be a confirmation of the first line. Well done Yvonne. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2021
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Another lovely Swap Quatrain in the offering this morning. A repeat which is not really a repeat . It just seems to be a confirmation of the first line. Well done Yvonne. Nancy:)
Comment Written 19-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2021
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Thank you. I'm glad you think so.
Comment from Paul McFarland
I was all set to give you a five star rating, but after reading your notes on the swap quatrain, I quickly changed my mind. I've got to get up to snuff on all the different poetic forms. This is a great poem.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2021
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I was all set to give you a five star rating, but after reading your notes on the swap quatrain, I quickly changed my mind. I've got to get up to snuff on all the different poetic forms. This is a great poem.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much. I appreciate the stars.
