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Tribute to Crzypntr.

Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "We'll Not Forget."
A memorial to a brother writer

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Comment from Ulla
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Hi Sandra, it a beautiful tribute you paid to what appeared to have been a lovely man. I never came across him on this site and I'm now sorry that I never did. Your poem is beautiful. A wonderful contribution. Ulla xxxx

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2021
    Thank you, Ulla. He was an amazing man. I'm sure many on here will miss him. Thanks for your kind comments, my friend. Warm hugs. Sandra xxx
Comment from BethShelby
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This is a beautiful tribute to August. I didn't know him but I wish I had. So mnay who knew him had wonderful things to say about him and I sure he won't be forgotten.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2021
    Thank you for reading my tribute to August, Beth. I think there are many on here who wished they'd known him better. Warm hugs, my friend, Sandra xx
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-This is beautiful, Sandra,
from the picture, presentation,
and your poem.
-It is very moving and hard
to write about because you
capture so many emotions.
-I did not know him well, but
I got the feeling he was very kind.
-I do not know how he managed
to deal with the pain he must
have encountered that day that
no one will forget.
-You have a beautiful ending
to the poem, and I think he
has to be at peace now.
-Thank you for sharing this.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2021
    Thank you, Pam. It took me ages to get this one right. He was a very compassionate man, always thinking of others. I'm really glad you thought my tribute to August was a good one. Thanks so much for the lovely comments, my friend. I really appreciate them. Love and hugs. Sandra xxx

    I can't wait to read your final chapter. :)) xx
reply by Pam (respa) on 18-Sep-2021
    You are very welcome, Sandra. Your review almost brought tears to my eyes.
    The final segment will be a poem:) How is your Betrayal book going?
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
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This is a very beautifully written tribute to a fine poet. I didn't have the pleasure of knowing him but I've heard so many good things about him as a person and his poetic skills. So sorry to hear of his loss.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2021
    Thank you for reading my tribute to August, Joanne. He will be missed so much by many. Warm hugs, my friend. :) Sandra
Comment from aryr
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This was indeed a wonderful tribute to August, Sandra. I found your words very touching and meaningful. The picture was beautiful because it brought a sense of peace and calmness with it. My prayers are with him, his family and everyone who knew him. Blessings, hugs and smiles.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2021
    Thank you for reading my tribute to August, Alie. It's so sad that we have lost another wonderful author from our Fanstorian family. Stay safe, my friend. Warm hugs, Sandra xx
reply by aryr on 18-Sep-2021
    You are so welcome, Sandra, you as well-be safe.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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It sounds like you knew August very well Sandra and I enjoyed your joyous tribute, a well rhymed and metered poem filled with remembrances, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2021
    Thank you, Dolly. I didn't know him half as much as I would have liked to. He was a remarkable man and did so much for charity. I'm glad you liked my tribute to him. Warm hugs. Sandra xx
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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Your tribute poem is excellent in every respect--skillfully composed, vividly descriptive (giving specific details about his character and giving nature)--sending a powerful message. Would you mind clarifying "act of evil"?

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2021
    Thank you for reading my tribute to August, Janice. He was a remarkable man and poet. It's so sad the way we are losing so many of our best authors on Fanstory.
    August was very badly hurt in the 9/11 attack on the Pentagon. Those evil people are hopefully suffering in hell now. Thanks again, my friend. Warm hugs. Sandra xx
reply by Janice Canerdy on 18-Sep-2021
    THANKS!
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
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Heartrending lament. Stunning tribute--I feel as if you've deepened my understanding of August--with whom I never had interaction. I read a few of his stunning poems. This inspires me to read more. Well done.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2021
    Thank you, Liz. He was such a kind man, regardless of his own pain, he would always help others. And, he was an excellent poet. We keep losing our talented authors, it's a bit worrying! Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from robyn corum
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Sandra,

This is such a beautiful, beautiful gift for the family of August, who've been left behind, hurting. I know it will offer comfort and smiles. It's so precious! Thank you!!!

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2021
    Aw, thank you, Robyn. I needed to write something special because he was special. I'm so pleased you think it will be of some comfort to his family. That's all anyone can wish for. Love and hugs, my friend. Sandra xx
Comment from lyenochka
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Thank you, Sandra! You gave me a whole new dimension about this fellow writer. I didn't know about all his other good deeds. I didn't know that "an act of evil took him away." Are you referring to the injuries from the 9/11 attack? I keep learning more from all these tributes!

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2021
    Yes, it was the 9/11 attack, but not at the Twin Towers, it was at the Pentagon. He was badly injured that day. It's so sad, those terrorists who did this will know now that they won't be getting all those virgins for being so good and murdering the infidels. Makes me so angry. Thanks Helen, for reading and your nice comments. I do appreciate it. Warm hugs. Sandra xx