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A memorial to a brother writer

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Comment from dragonpoet
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Sandra,
This is a wonderful tribute to August. It seems he was a wonderful person.
I don't know if I ever read his poems. Maybe I'll go to his portfolio and read some.
I can understand it taking a long time to write a poem like this.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 02-Nov-2021
    Thank you, Joan, for delving into my portfolio again, that was so kind of you. August was a unique poet, and you would enjoy his work. I'm really happy you liked my tribute to him, he was a great man. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra
reply by dragonpoet on 02-Nov-2021
    You're welcome, , Sandra.
    I will check his profile out. It is still up, isn't it.
    Same to you
    Joan
Comment from Sandra Barlow
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Very touching. I don't know who the person is that you wrote this about, but you wrote it beautifully. I'm sure he was much loved by you to have thought out the words so carefully.
Just a thought in verse 4, a before wife fits more smoothly. It's fantastic just as it is.
What was the evil that took his life?

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2021
    Thank you so much, Sandra, for this really lovely review, and for the golden sixth star!! August was a 'survivor' of the 911 bombing in the Twin Towers. He was badly hurt and had been in a lot of pain since that time. The evil doers have still been claiming lives since that day. I'm so pleased you enjoyed my tribute to him. Thanks again, my friend. :) Sandra xx
Comment from DSchlosser
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I'm not sure of who August is. I'm sorry that we lost another person from the site though. I've already witnessed a couple, and it sucks to see people lost. This is the one community that I've done well with getting along with people, and it's not a crazy social media place like a lot of other places.

Sounds like you knew August and some of his personal life. I hope his family is doing okay.


 Comment Written 27-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
    He was a really nice person, and an excellent poet, David. Too young to have died, as I'm sure his wife and family are feeling. We have lost a few of our great authors on here these last two years, it's so sad. Thank you for reading my tribute, my friend. Warm hugs. Sandra xx
reply by DSchlosser on 27-Sep-2021
    I feel bad because I don't quite know enough people on here still, but those I do meet I consider them friends. Everyone for the most part has been very kind and professional when they write. We're all in the same boat working to create.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
    No need to feel bad, David, you haven't been here long enough to really get to know people. I feel I know you quite well now, and consider you a friend. It takes time. :))
Comment from RGstar
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So nice of you here.
I hadn't realized that August was connected to s meant. I treasure that feeling.
We had a special connection. Thank you so much for this beautiful tribute.
My best wishes.
Have a pleasant day.
RG

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021
    Thank you for reading my tribute to August, RG. I feel we are writing too many of these lately. So many Fanstorians are passing away. So sad. Warm hugs, my friend. Sandra xx
Comment from Sally Law
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Thank you for the lovely heartfelt tribute to August. Another gifted friend gone to God. I'm glad for writing and how our words and legacy lives on.

Sending you my best today as always, and comfort and peace in your loss,
Sal XOs

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021
    Thank you, Sally, for reading my tribute to a wonderful man. August was a living saint. We'll miss him on here Fanstory. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
reply by Sally Law on 21-Sep-2021
    You are most welcome. I finally posted mine this morning. :)) XOs
Comment from judiverse
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My sympathy to the family. I didn't know August or his work, but from the tributes I have read, he must have been a very special guy. You mention his kindness and the feelings of joy, love, pain, and tears that he brought into his poetry. You've written a beautiful tribute with excellent word choices and rhyme. judi

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021
    Thank you so much for reading my tribute to August. You would have liked him, Judi, he was such a gracious man. Sending a warm hug, my friend. :) Sandra xxx
reply by judiverse on 20-Sep-2021
    You're welcome. I'm sorry I don't have time to read more of the authors on the site. I'm sure I'm missing many fine ones--like August. judi
Comment from Begin Again
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So lovely and heartwarming as a tribute to a fellow poet and friend. I loved your words and the introduction to someone I did not know. I hope he is a peace now.

Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021
    Thank you, dear Carol, for reading my tribute to August. You would have liked him. I'm getting worried about you, please pm me. Love and hugs, my friend. Sandra xxx
Comment from juliaSjames
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Beautiful tribute dear Sandra. I did not know this writer but as he was part of our community I mourn his passing..

Sometimes when I read your delightful audacious fiction I forget your talent as a poet. This sincere heartwarming tribute is a timely reminder.

May August rest in peace. Sincere condolences to his grieving family and friends.

Stay safe and blessed

Julia

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021
    Thank you so much for reading my tribute, Julia. It was a hard one to write, we seem to be losing a lot of our FS family lately. August was such a nice gentleman in every sense. Love and hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx (And thank you for the lovely compliment!:)
Comment from Eternal Muse
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A beautiful tribute to your fellow member who had left us for heaven. I admired your rhyming, meter, flow, imagery and visuals, and superb artistic presentation.

I did not have the honor to know his work but by what I read about him, he must have been very special.

A wonderful paean which August would have been proud of.

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 19-Sep-2021
    Thank you so much for reading my tribute to August, and that golden star you have crowned it with. That was so nice of you. August poetry is still on FS, if you wanted to read some of them. Thanks again, my friend. Warm hugs, Sandra xx
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
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Lovely dedication Sandra to one of the FS members. I did not know August but you have written a lovely poem to his memory. I've not posted or, indeed written anything for a long while. I miss FS but under the circumstances I don't feel up to it. A lovely entry to the book. Love Dorothy xxx

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 19-Sep-2021
    Thank you, dear Dorothy, for reading my tribute. It's not a nice thing to write, I'd rather not have written this and August was still with us. So sad. Warm hugs, my friend. Love Sandra xx