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Sunshine

What I Love About the Sunshine

6 total reviews 
Comment from lyenochka
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Really loved your reflection on the meaning of "sunshine" to you. Yes, the physical sunshine is beautiful and a great reminder of God's love for us. Then you give us the beauty of the spiritual significance of light. Jesus is the Light of the world. And then you make it so personal by sharing your family reunions and singing that song together.
Hope you do well in the contest!

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2021

reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021
    Thanks, not doing well in the contest.
reply by lyenochka on 22-Sep-2021
    Well, I hope you had fun writing it. That's what really counts. 🌺🌼💕
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021
    I did, I really thought ythexstoryvwould do well!
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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Sunshine makes a person feel better. It brings lots of nourishment to the many things God has created on our earth. The warmth and light from the sun creates the grass and flowers to grow. Like your poem.

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2021

reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021
    Thanks, it is a story not going well in the contest.
reply by Rosemary Everson1 on 22-Sep-2021
    I know it is hard to figure out how everybody votes....I am in a contest, too, right now that the voting is not going too well. Good luck!
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021
    Thanks.
Comment from Bill Schott
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This story, Sunshine, hits the target in the center ring as the idea of sunshine really brightens up the day when it's connected with great times and memories of loved ones. Neat.

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2021

reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021
    Not doing well in the contest.
Comment from Mama Baer
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Thank you for your testimony and for sharing this beautiful piece with us. As a fellow member of the Church, I am so glad we know we will again be with our wonderful fathers. I also know they are not far. Great job on the contest entry!

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2021

reply by the author on 22-Sep-2021
    Thanks, not doing well in the contest yet.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
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Uplifting! A heartfelt paean to sunshine, both literal and metaphorical. Stunning segue into your faith. Your delight in sunshine is made manifest. Fiine work.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2021

reply by the author on 18-Sep-2021
    Thanks so much!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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I enjoyed reading your contest entry, Mystery Author. You picked a great word and explained how it affects you well. I love the quote by HKeller. Your many examples of how the sun brightens your life and others are great.

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Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2021

reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021
    In the second thing you wrote, did you say I need to make a slight correction?
reply by Jannypan (Jan) on 17-Sep-2021
    Yes, look at the letters before the word hym in that line.