Comment from Sanku

Excellent

Great visuals of The hallucinations of the drunk man .May be his subconscious mind has woken up. The bottles talking was very graphic
I remember you have written this bar before .

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2021

thanks for the comments. I dreamt this one up too. It was based on a writing com prompt to write a personification poem

Comment from Mary Vigasin

Excellent

amazing imagery in telling of Sam Adam's final binge. The hallucinations he suffers is vividly told. I expected the Grim Reaper would get him but not as expected. I expected him to collapse from the alcohol and here he was chased down by his own delirium.
Well done Jake.
Regards,
Mary

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2021

thanks for the comments. I dreamt this one up too. It was based on a writing com prompt to write a personification poem

Comment from Eternal Muse

Excellent

This is quite an adventure Sam Adams had in Bangkok! Loved the imagery, visuals, the humor the upbeat tone and flair.

A good choice of an artwork. Thank you so much for sharing.

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2021

yeah I had fun with it. the prompt was to write a personification poem

Comment from pookietoo

Excellent

A very interesting poem with a lot of detail about Sam Adam's drimking. You wrote it as if I was witnessing it. Thanks for sharing this with so many details.

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2021

it was fun writing it. the prompt was to write a personification poem.