The Dock and the Bay
Five line poem20 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Lovely image, Teri.
-I like the title.
-I like how you begin
the poem with those words.
-It makes a good setting.
-A positive message about
belief and faith, and appreciating
His beauty around us.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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-Lovely image, Teri.
-I like the title.
-I like how you begin
the poem with those words.
-It makes a good setting.
-A positive message about
belief and faith, and appreciating
His beauty around us.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much Pam for the great review and your very nice and true comments. love and blessings, Teri
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You are very welcome, Teri.
Comment from pharp
Teri,
This is such a beautiful 5 line poem, and it is right on time.
We must always trust Him, and there is no room for doubt; with God, all things are possible.
Thanks for the peace your words have given.
Lots of love and hugs...Portia
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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Teri,
This is such a beautiful 5 line poem, and it is right on time.
We must always trust Him, and there is no room for doubt; with God, all things are possible.
Thanks for the peace your words have given.
Lots of love and hugs...Portia
Comment Written 15-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much my sweet Portia for this great review and your very lovely and so true comments. love and blessings, Teri
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You are welcome, sweetie.💖💖💖
Comment from lyenochka
Love your poem and picture, Teri! What a great message to call us to trust in the Lord everyday - even those days when we are faced with challenges or bad news. Best wishes in the contest!
Suggestion:
All is Gods beauty (God's)
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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Love your poem and picture, Teri! What a great message to call us to trust in the Lord everyday - even those days when we are faced with challenges or bad news. Best wishes in the contest!
Suggestion:
All is Gods beauty (God's)
Comment Written 15-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much my dear friend for this great review and your very lovely comments and your help. I did fix that! Thanks again! love and blessings, Teri
Comment from BethShelby
Nice five line poem. Anything God has created is beautiful and perfect. The dock may be manmade, but God creation is all around and he did give man the talent to create as well. Lovely picture.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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Nice five line poem. Anything God has created is beautiful and perfect. The dock may be manmade, but God creation is all around and he did give man the talent to create as well. Lovely picture.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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Amen! Thank you so much for the great review and very lovely and true comments. love and blessings, Teri
Comment from royowen
Whatever God has created is undeniably beautiful, whatever happens to it is man's sin being responsible for the pollution, the contempt that man has caused falls on our heads, beautifully written Teri, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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Whatever God has created is undeniably beautiful, whatever happens to it is man's sin being responsible for the pollution, the contempt that man has caused falls on our heads, beautifully written Teri, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 15-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much Roy for this great review and your very lovely and so true comments. Blessings, teri
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Most welcome
Comment from pookietoo
A lovely 5 line poem. Keep up the great work writing your poems. Good luck to you in the contest. I enjoyed reading this poem. Best wishes. Keep sharing your poems.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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A lovely 5 line poem. Keep up the great work writing your poems. Good luck to you in the contest. I enjoyed reading this poem. Best wishes. Keep sharing your poems.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much for the great review and your very nice comments. love and blessings, Teri
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Comment from Gert sherwood
Five line poem
The Dock and the Bay
Teri7 I wish you the best in the contest smiles, to where you wrote
All is Gods beauty
Gert
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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Five line poem
The Dock and the Bay
Teri7 I wish you the best in the contest smiles, to where you wrote
All is Gods beauty
Gert
Comment Written 15-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much Gert for this great review and your very lovely and true comments. love and blessings, Teri
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your image choice is beautiful with equally beautiful words to show praise for God's beauty. I enjoyed reading your contest entry, Teri. Great job with the syllable count and the awesome message.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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Your image choice is beautiful with equally beautiful words to show praise for God's beauty. I enjoyed reading your contest entry, Teri. Great job with the syllable count and the awesome message.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 15-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much Jan for the great review and your very lovely and true comments. love and blessings, teri
Comment from Begin Again
The Lord blesses us with his marvelous creation and as we follow him and believe, we will learn that he can give us so much more... a lasting eternity. What a blessing that will be.
Smiles, Carol
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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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The Lord blesses us with his marvelous creation and as we follow him and believe, we will learn that he can give us so much more... a lasting eternity. What a blessing that will be.
Smiles, Carol
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Comment Written 15-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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Amen Carol!!! Thank you for the great review and very lovely and so true comments. love and blessings, Teri
Comment from Sally Law
Lovely thought put to verse and aptly illustrated. God's beauty is clearly seen if we would only look.
[God's] beauty needs to be a possessive noun.
Sending you my best today as,
Sally XOs...
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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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Lovely thought put to verse and aptly illustrated. God's beauty is clearly seen if we would only look.
[God's] beauty needs to be a possessive noun.
Sending you my best today as,
Sally XOs...
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Comment Written 15-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much Sally for the great review, your lovely comments and your help. I did fix that! love and blessings, Teri
