The Dock and the Bay
Five line poem20 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This five-line poem, Dock and the Bay, has the proper formatting and notes that this scene and all others example God's beautiful world. Nice.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021
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This five-line poem, Dock and the Bay, has the proper formatting and notes that this scene and all others example God's beautiful world. Nice.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021
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Thank you Bill for the great review and your very nice comments. Blessings, Teri
Comment from Janetsue
I like the spiritual message of your 5 Line Poem entry. It is positive and we need more of that in these present troubling days. There is so much beauty to experience and appreciate. God, after all, is the Master Creator of the universe, and His creations are inspiring. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021
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I like the spiritual message of your 5 Line Poem entry. It is positive and we need more of that in these present troubling days. There is so much beauty to experience and appreciate. God, after all, is the Master Creator of the universe, and His creations are inspiring. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much my friend for the great review and your very nice, lovely and so true comments. love and blessings, teri
Comment from Paul McFarland
Nicely done in just five lines. Good advice for everyone. I can feel your Christian belief through this poem. May Christ be with you in the good times and the bad.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021
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Nicely done in just five lines. Good advice for everyone. I can feel your Christian belief through this poem. May Christ be with you in the good times and the bad.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much for the great review and your very nice and true comments. May God bless you! Teri
Comment from Ben Colder
Yes, we are blessed to have been created by a God of love. Who in His beautifully talented mind shows the beauty of His creative thoughts. Well done, Terri.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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Yes, we are blessed to have been created by a God of love. Who in His beautifully talented mind shows the beauty of His creative thoughts. Well done, Terri.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much Ben for the great review and your very lovely and so very true comments. May God bless you! Teri
Comment from Carol Clark2
What a beautiful and calming image to accompany your words! Good words to remind us that God is the giver of the beauty around us. Best wishes in the contest. Carol
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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What a beautiful and calming image to accompany your words! Good words to remind us that God is the giver of the beauty around us. Best wishes in the contest. Carol
Comment Written 16-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much Carol for this great review and your very lovely and so true comments. love and blessings, Teri
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You're welcome, Teri. Have a blessed week.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your five-line poem is lovely, thoughtful, and reverent. As we enjoy our world, we need to be appreciative ALWAYS of the Creator of all. You choice of artwork is interesting.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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Your five-line poem is lovely, thoughtful, and reverent. As we enjoy our world, we need to be appreciative ALWAYS of the Creator of all. You choice of artwork is interesting.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much Janice for the great review and your very nice and so true comments. love and blessings, Teri
Comment from Gloria ....
This is really nice, Teri. I enjoy the peaceful tone as your tone is complemented by both presentation and poem.
Wishing you great luck with the Contest Committee. :))
Gloria
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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This is really nice, Teri. I enjoy the peaceful tone as your tone is complemented by both presentation and poem.
Wishing you great luck with the Contest Committee. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 16-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much Gloria for this great review and your very lovely comments. love and blessings, Teri
Comment from Ricky1024
"The Dock and the Bay"
This is a Five Line Poetry Contest Entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures, aligned Perfectly.
Good luck Theresa with this one.
Doctor Ricky 1034
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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"The Dock and the Bay"
This is a Five Line Poetry Contest Entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures, aligned Perfectly.
Good luck Theresa with this one.
Doctor Ricky 1034
Comment Written 15-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much my friend for the great review and your very nice comments. Blessings, Teri
Comment from joycetreasures
Hello KT,
Again, this is a simple, lovely and clear message about God's perfect way He shares nature's beauty to ALL. Also, your title and image is so serene and calming. I really like the 5 line poem. Yes, we should TRUST in our Savior always. Well done.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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Hello KT,
Again, this is a simple, lovely and clear message about God's perfect way He shares nature's beauty to ALL. Also, your title and image is so serene and calming. I really like the 5 line poem. Yes, we should TRUST in our Savior always. Well done.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much for the great review, your lovely and true comments and the pretty six stars! love and blessings, Teri
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You are welcome.
Comment from AnnaLinda
Teri,
When I read your first 2 lines a song came to me...
Your form is spot in and I like how you've woven God's work and man's work (the dock) to show the beautiful union of God and man.
Very encouraging and uplifting entry. I hope you win.
AnnLinda
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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Teri,
When I read your first 2 lines a song came to me...
Your form is spot in and I like how you've woven God's work and man's work (the dock) to show the beautiful union of God and man.
Very encouraging and uplifting entry. I hope you win.
AnnLinda
Comment Written 15-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much my dear friend for the great review, your lovely and true comments and the pretty six stars. love and blessings, teri
