Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Your poem reminds us that there are so many different types of flowers and that all are beautiful no matter what season in which they bloom.
Pretty artwork.
Good luck, keep writng and stay healthy
dragonpoet

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021

Thanks. I will. I would appreciate it if you would review my Jessica's year of seeing nature story.

reply by dragonpoet on 15-Sep-2021

You?re welcome
Joan

reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021

I would appreciate it if you would review my Jessica's Year Of Nature story.

reply by dragonpoet on 15-Sep-2021

It is kind of hard to do that if I don't know your name to find your portfolio.
Joan

reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021

Pookietoo.

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Such a lovely offering in one of my favorite subjects: the flower. Yes, even by the sea. I live near the Atlantic and we enjoy all rare tropical flowers: The bird of paradise and Siam Tulips grow well here. Sending you my best today as always, abd best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal :))

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021

Thanks. I would appreciate it if you would review my Jessica's year of seeing nature story.

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

Clearly your love of flowers shows through this short piece of rhyming couplets set in four quatrains.

As a hint I would suggest you try to eliminate too much repetition there are usually different ways of saying the same thing. You have a lot of repetition of the word 'some' - I counted and the sum of the somes came to seven!

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021

I changed it, now I have 3 somes.

reply by Pantygynt on 15-Sep-2021

That is a lot less intrusive.