Comment from pookietoo

Good

Good story. Interesting. Keep up with the story writing. Keep up and sharing your poems. I enjoyed reading this story. Best wishes always. Thanks again.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021

Thank you :)
Hope to hear from you again. More Breedline adventures to come.

Sincerely,
Shana :)

reply by pookietoo on 16-Sep-2021

Ok

Comment from Mary Shifman

Excellent

I was so happy to find another excellent chapter of The Blood Cure to read today. It moves along at a rapid pace although the pause breaks are painful sometimes! I enjoy this book and your memorable characters. I can hardly wait for another chapter.

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021

Thanks again, Mary :)
So thrilled you enjoyed another episode of the Breedline saga. I hope I continue to keep you entertained with my stories. I sure do enjoy creating them for you. More next Monday!

Thanks again!
Sincerely,
Shana :)

reply by Mary Shifman on 14-Sep-2021

You are so welcome! I love this kind of story, so keep it up, please.

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

The Blood Cure/Part 2
scongrove, what you said when describing each of your chacters
is a big help to know who is who. As I read so far you have an amazing way of keeping us informed of their identify from you changing a wolf to a human and how each of your character have a has a purpose Example of one your
BREEDLINE - A species of humans that have the ability to change from human form into wolf form if they are born an identical twin.
Gert

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021

Thank you, Gert :)
Glad you like the story. I try to make sure readers understand what the Breedline are and each character's special abilities. It's fun to create new adventures for them. I also enjoy sharing them here.

Thanks again for the awesome review and kind words. I appreciate it!
Sincerely,
Shana :)

reply by Gert sherwood on 14-Sep-2021

scongrove you are most welcome
Gert

Comment from royowen

Exceptional

You are amazing Shana, for every problem there is a solution and you always find one dear friend. Particularly in a dire situation, you're even going to find one for Joseph too I'm sure. Meanwhile there's a so called "crime scene" but the two detectives are going to have trouble explaining the monster debris floating around, and it would probably cause a mass panic. Beautifully written again Shana, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021

Awww... Thank you, Roy :)
I do enjoy solving what I bring on to my characters. It's not so easy in the real world, so pretending I can make life easy with the Breedline gives me a sense of peace. I always love a happy ending. And you know me, I will always make sure my Breedline stories end with that "good feeling."
Thanks again for your kind words and awesome review. I appreciate you!
Always your fan,
Shana :)

reply by royowen on 14-Sep-2021

You are a one off Shana,

Comment from SHABAMO

Excellent

I read one of your previous chapters and really enjoyed it, this one was also excellent. You really have created an immediately easier to understand, but decidedly unique supernatural world. Keep it up!

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021

Thank you, Shabamo :)
Glad to hear from you again! Thanks so much for taking the time to read another chapter. I appreciate your kind words and generous stars.

Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from AJ McCall

Exceptional

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!

Why do you do this to me SHANA!! The length for the previous two chapters were absoultely perfect; WHY DIDN'T YOU KEEP IT THAT WAY! I can't wait until next Monday, I have to know what HAPPENS!!

(Lol, this was a good way to bait people, Shana. And I didn't know Vampires believed in God, lol. Cool add-on. And also, Lenny has a wife?!!? That's just amazing.

I did notice a line that confused me though: Roman visible shivered.
I know what you were trying to say but I think you should word it differently like: A visible shiver traveled through Roman. You could try a synonym for 'traveled' if you don't like that word. Well, I guess I'll see you later... or next Monday. UGH. I hate waiting... LOL. SIX STARS!!!

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021

Thank you, AJ :)
Haha! Sorry for leaving you with a cliffhanger, but that's actually as far as I've gotten in the story. I will have to get back to writing. I've had writers block again too. Ugg! But I'm moving forward.
And yes, in my story, my "good" vampires believe in God.
Thanks for the tip too! I appreciate all the help.
The next chapter will be back to Joseph and Carrie and then on to the Breedline crew and the fight between the remaining Biters. There is definitely a lot to write about. I wish I could write faster, but unfortunately, I'm slow. I feel like this book is taking me longer than all the others. One good thing to mention, my 3rd and 4th book is getting produced in audiobook. The fifth one (The Immortal) is already out. Now all I have to do is finish this one and rewrite my first two... then get them all in audible.

Thanks again for your support! You make a difference.
Hugs,
Shana :)

reply by AJ McCall on 13-Sep-2021

You're welcome, Shana!!! I have a slight form of writer's block as well. Trying to get back to my story. Oh, geez!! I forgot about Joseph and Carrie, lol. I can't wait to read about them again. It seems like you got a handful of stuff to do. (I gotta get my story produced like that when its published.) I hope you find some inspiration soon! (before Monday lol).