Miranda
My cute little pet3 total reviews
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
With the cute perfectly chosen artwork, your poem easily stands alone, telling its own little story. Loved the ending rhymes of your 5-7-5 senryu. Excellent entry for the contest! Found it adorable and humorous.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021
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With the cute perfectly chosen artwork, your poem easily stands alone, telling its own little story. Loved the ending rhymes of your 5-7-5 senryu. Excellent entry for the contest! Found it adorable and humorous.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much
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You are so welcome.
Comment from SHABAMO
Cute poem! I hope it does well in the contest. I am a little surprised your dog does not slobber all over her and love her though.
One recommendation would be to re-rhyme the third letter, I can't say I think 'er rhymes with Panda.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021
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Cute poem! I hope it does well in the contest. I am a little surprised your dog does not slobber all over her and love her though.
One recommendation would be to re-rhyme the third letter, I can't say I think 'er rhymes with Panda.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021
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Thanks for reviewing
Comment from Pantygynt
This is fine for syllable count and is certainly fun but a senryu like its close relative the haiku is not supposed to rhyme. this does rhyme. In fact much of the amusement lies in the the fact that it does. I'll give it five if you'll promise not to call it a senryu.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021
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This is fine for syllable count and is certainly fun but a senryu like its close relative the haiku is not supposed to rhyme. this does rhyme. In fact much of the amusement lies in the the fact that it does. I'll give it five if you'll promise not to call it a senryu.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021
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Thanks.I wont call it a Senyru although it doesn't say in the competition rules that it can't rhyme. Love Jen.
