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the abduction of the Twins

the abduction of the twins almost renews the war

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Comment from Nubian Queen Shyt
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I liked this as it is very detailed and you tell this story with great power. I also like to be educated about places I've yet to hear about in my life so it is refreshing to see that information as well

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021
    thanks it was fun writing this. I dreamt the whole thing up.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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An inventive and realistic scenario and I wondered if it was a real story whilst reading, a fascinating epic poem Jake, an imaginative tale of woe, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021
    glad you appreciated it. I had fun writing it. I dreamt the whole thing up. I don't dream dreams I dream movies.