Those Bygone Years
Still missing her60 total reviews
Comment from royowen
You've been on your own for a long time now, and must have been relatively young when she passed away. My father passed away in 1987, so long ago now, he was much younger than I am now. He enjoyed life, but he was taken to soon. Beautifully written my friend, I'm so sorry for your loss, beautifully written, blessings Roy
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You've been on your own for a long time now, and must have been relatively young when she passed away. My father passed away in 1987, so long ago now, he was much younger than I am now. He enjoyed life, but he was taken to soon. Beautifully written my friend, I'm so sorry for your loss, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 09-Sep-2021
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Those Bygone Years
by jaybird1
The peace and happiness shared that day,
still (lngers) on, will always stay.
I always enjoy your love poems for your wife.
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Those Bygone Years
by jaybird1
The peace and happiness shared that day,
still (lngers) on, will always stay.
I always enjoy your love poems for your wife.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2021
Comment from dragonpoet
This is well written group of quatrains giving us a brief but complete history of your marriage and family. You get the feeling of how much you love and miss her
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
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This is well written group of quatrains giving us a brief but complete history of your marriage and family. You get the feeling of how much you love and miss her
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 09-Sep-2021
Comment from dellsworthpoet
A nice poem with a wonderful message.
The pace is good. The rhyme scheme is tight. The progress through the poem has a nice arc.
Thanks for sharing.
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A nice poem with a wonderful message.
The pace is good. The rhyme scheme is tight. The progress through the poem has a nice arc.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2021
Comment from Sherry Asbury
Oh, my dear man - this is a beautiful tribute to your wife and your love. I am sorry you must now be alone, but your lovely poetry is a blessing to us all. You are one of my heroes here and when I see your name - I smile.
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Oh, my dear man - this is a beautiful tribute to your wife and your love. I am sorry you must now be alone, but your lovely poetry is a blessing to us all. You are one of my heroes here and when I see your name - I smile.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2021
Comment from Raul1
I like your poetry. It is good that your poetry uplifts your spirit. A well written poem. It is interesting and unique. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
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I like your poetry. It is good that your poetry uplifts your spirit. A well written poem. It is interesting and unique. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 09-Sep-2021
Comment from jenintorre
Wow, wow wow.I love this poem. Your whole lifestory in so few words with amazing rhyme and rhythm. What more can I say.Thank you so much for sharing. Jen.
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Wow, wow wow.I love this poem. Your whole lifestory in so few words with amazing rhyme and rhythm. What more can I say.Thank you so much for sharing. Jen.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2021
Comment from Laurie Holding
Another touching tribute to your rich life. I'm so glad to be following you, jaybird, and to see your name come up in my messages; I always know you'll provide me with solid advice or insight on life, in every stanza. Thank you for being out there! This was a beauty.
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Another touching tribute to your rich life. I'm so glad to be following you, jaybird, and to see your name come up in my messages; I always know you'll provide me with solid advice or insight on life, in every stanza. Thank you for being out there! This was a beauty.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2021
Comment from rockinm76233
Good job Jaybird. Keep writing and I'll keep reading. You've seen a lot of life and I thank you for sharing it with us. What do you do now? Do you still live alone? Just curious.
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Good job Jaybird. Keep writing and I'll keep reading. You've seen a lot of life and I thank you for sharing it with us. What do you do now? Do you still live alone? Just curious.
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Comment Written 09-Sep-2021
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I understand how true love will always be missed. I enjoyed reading this poem. Thank you for sharing it with us. I could feel the happiness you shared while reading.
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I understand how true love will always be missed. I enjoyed reading this poem. Thank you for sharing it with us. I could feel the happiness you shared while reading.
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Comment Written 09-Sep-2021
