Those Bygone Years
Still missing her60 total reviews
Comment from amahra
This writing was certainly a great tribute to who seemed a wonderful and well-loved wife and mother. Your poem was beautifully worded. And of course, as always, the rhyming was perfect. Great job!
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This writing was certainly a great tribute to who seemed a wonderful and well-loved wife and mother. Your poem was beautifully worded. And of course, as always, the rhyming was perfect. Great job!
Comment Written 09-Sep-2021
Comment from June Sargent
It is obvious how much you miss your soul mate. After all these years, the pain of your loss is still very deep and real. But your memories - and poetry - will enable you to keep going. You've had a fruitful and joyous life. Preserve those precious memories and share them with us through your beautiful poetry.
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It is obvious how much you miss your soul mate. After all these years, the pain of your loss is still very deep and real. But your memories - and poetry - will enable you to keep going. You've had a fruitful and joyous life. Preserve those precious memories and share them with us through your beautiful poetry.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2021
Comment from LJbutterfly
This is a heartwarming tribute to the events of a lifetime. It is also a captivating love story of a man and woman connected and committed through eternity. I'm glad you have poetry, and glad you share it with your friends.
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This is a heartwarming tribute to the events of a lifetime. It is also a captivating love story of a man and woman connected and committed through eternity. I'm glad you have poetry, and glad you share it with your friends.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2021
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and well written six star poem in my eyes. You used great descriptive words and lovely sentiments about your wife that is not here any longer. May God bless by you. Thanks for always sharing with us. Teri
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This is a very beautiful and well written six star poem in my eyes. You used great descriptive words and lovely sentiments about your wife that is not here any longer. May God bless by you. Thanks for always sharing with us. Teri
Comment Written 09-Sep-2021
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This is such well-written, moving poem. It expresses a wonderful message about blessings that make life so precious, love and loved oned--and how
poetry can help us cope after a grievous loss.
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This is such well-written, moving poem. It expresses a wonderful message about blessings that make life so precious, love and loved oned--and how
poetry can help us cope after a grievous loss.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2021
Comment from Senyai
Hi Jay,
Beautiful life story poem, excellently written and endearingly revealing! I see your life as a tale of what it takes to live life to the fullest and savor the golden years...I'm so sorry you lost your wife a bit early but you will see your true love once again.
Live life on your own terms, Jay. Your poetry is superb, sir!
Always,
Senyai
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Hi Jay,
Beautiful life story poem, excellently written and endearingly revealing! I see your life as a tale of what it takes to live life to the fullest and savor the golden years...I'm so sorry you lost your wife a bit early but you will see your true love once again.
Live life on your own terms, Jay. Your poetry is superb, sir!
Always,
Senyai
Comment Written 09-Sep-2021
Comment from lyenochka
Hi Jaybird! Thanks for sharing about your life. So sad that your lovely wife passed so soon. I liked that you said "with God's grace they all survived Love, joy and peace was what we shared." Thanks for sharing your poetry!
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Hi Jaybird! Thanks for sharing about your life. So sad that your lovely wife passed so soon. I liked that you said "with God's grace they all survived Love, joy and peace was what we shared." Thanks for sharing your poetry!
Comment Written 09-Sep-2021
Comment from Mary Vigasin
A heartwarming and beautiful tribute to your late wife. Your deep passion and love keeps her close to your heart. Because of this wonderful woman, we are blessed with your kindness and wisdom.
Blessings always,
Mary
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A heartwarming and beautiful tribute to your late wife. Your deep passion and love keeps her close to your heart. Because of this wonderful woman, we are blessed with your kindness and wisdom.
Blessings always,
Mary
Comment Written 09-Sep-2021
Comment from Eunice Amero
It starts off lovely and I even felt I was there but then it becomes sad. It makes you wonder, why Lord? She was my love and now you miss her. Life at times can be lonely. Thank you for sharing you did a good job.
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It starts off lovely and I even felt I was there but then it becomes sad. It makes you wonder, why Lord? She was my love and now you miss her. Life at times can be lonely. Thank you for sharing you did a good job.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2021
Comment from Midi O'Rourke
Nicely written beautiful and moving poem. It is profoundly hard to lose a spouse. You were her gift. She had a love that lasted a lifetime. You have told a beautiful story in a beautiful form. It flows very well and takes the reader on your journey.
Blessings to you
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Nicely written beautiful and moving poem. It is profoundly hard to lose a spouse. You were her gift. She had a love that lasted a lifetime. You have told a beautiful story in a beautiful form. It flows very well and takes the reader on your journey.
Blessings to you
Comment Written 09-Sep-2021
