Those Bygone Years
Still missing her60 total reviews
Comment from Paul McFarland
These true stories born out in verse will bring a tear to the eye. Meter and rhyme scheme are very good as usual. Having been married for fifty-six years, I can really identify with this one.
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These true stories born out in verse will bring a tear to the eye. Meter and rhyme scheme are very good as usual. Having been married for fifty-six years, I can really identify with this one.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2021
Comment from Janetsue
Writing poetry can be very cathartic and you have penned a beautiful tribute to your wife who is no longer here to share your days. This is very well written.
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Writing poetry can be very cathartic and you have penned a beautiful tribute to your wife who is no longer here to share your days. This is very well written.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2021
Comment from DeboraDyess
What a beautiful biographical poem, Ja. I can feel your longing and pride. You did a great job filling in gaps for those of us who do not know you, and did the numbers smoothly, which is hard for me.
Excellent and sweet.
And I am sorry for your loss, although it happened so long ago. The myth that time heals is just that.
Blessings,
Deb
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What a beautiful biographical poem, Ja. I can feel your longing and pride. You did a great job filling in gaps for those of us who do not know you, and did the numbers smoothly, which is hard for me.
Excellent and sweet.
And I am sorry for your loss, although it happened so long ago. The myth that time heals is just that.
Blessings,
Deb
Comment Written 10-Sep-2021
Comment from Mia Twysted
What a lovely tribute to your wife. This piece tells the reader that there is a way to hold and honor those we have lost. It also gives a sense they are still with us even after they are gone.
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What a lovely tribute to your wife. This piece tells the reader that there is a way to hold and honor those we have lost. It also gives a sense they are still with us even after they are gone.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2021
Comment from mermaids
I can feel the love for your wife in your words. Excellent biographical poem that takes the reader on your life's journey. Excellent poetic form and a poem that touches the heart.
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I can feel the love for your wife in your words. Excellent biographical poem that takes the reader on your life's journey. Excellent poetic form and a poem that touches the heart.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2021
Comment from palmart
You packed life wisdom into a handful of words!! A poem with a hurricane of feelings ready to spark souls of any human being that becomes a reader. Great Writing!
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You packed life wisdom into a handful of words!! A poem with a hurricane of feelings ready to spark souls of any human being that becomes a reader. Great Writing!
Comment Written 10-Sep-2021
Comment from Boogienights
This is a beautiful love story. I am so sorry for your loss. This is a wonderful tribute to the love and life you shared. Thank you for sharing this with us
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This is a beautiful love story. I am so sorry for your loss. This is a wonderful tribute to the love and life you shared. Thank you for sharing this with us
Comment Written 10-Sep-2021
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your poem reads well with good rhymes and smooth flow. The story it tells is poignant, yet highlights the love you and your wife shred for so many years.
Respectfully, Jan
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Your poem reads well with good rhymes and smooth flow. The story it tells is poignant, yet highlights the love you and your wife shred for so many years.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 10-Sep-2021
Comment from zanya
What a beautiful tribute to a departed spouse told vividly with love and gratitude for a life shared with family and the final line is a reminder of ways to cope with the sense of loss
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What a beautiful tribute to a departed spouse told vividly with love and gratitude for a life shared with family and the final line is a reminder of ways to cope with the sense of loss
Comment Written 10-Sep-2021
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
It does sound like it was heaven while it lasted.
Alas, death was looming, made it's call,
we were against life's final wall.
My bride for life died in eighty two.
Poetry helps me to get through.
That is a long time mourning. Thirty nine years!
Ralf
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It does sound like it was heaven while it lasted.
Alas, death was looming, made it's call,
we were against life's final wall.
My bride for life died in eighty two.
Poetry helps me to get through.
That is a long time mourning. Thirty nine years!
Ralf
Comment Written 10-Sep-2021
