Secrets in the Wind
Viewing comments for Chapter 47 "Secrets in the Wind - Chap 47"A story of loss, deceit, murder and crime
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Comment from Patty Palmer
They are on the right track. It figures that its drugs going out in the false bottoms of the wine barrels. I like how he played it down that the dog wasn't very good at sniffing out drugs. I'm a little behind and trying to hit the chapters in the right order. I'm stuck in the hospital for an asthma attack and just starting to review so much that I've missed.
xxoo
Patty
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021
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They are on the right track. It figures that its drugs going out in the false bottoms of the wine barrels. I like how he played it down that the dog wasn't very good at sniffing out drugs. I'm a little behind and trying to hit the chapters in the right order. I'm stuck in the hospital for an asthma attack and just starting to review so much that I've missed.
xxoo
Patty
Comment Written 11-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021
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Oh I hope you are feeling better. i just saw that you had an asthma attack. Not good, girlfriend. Hope they have it under control and things are looking up.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
I don't think the drug secret is in the wind, anymore! Great action in this chapter. I'm still concerned about Annie.
Errors and suggestions:
The seventy-pound black Labrador Retriever lopped into the barn,
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The seventy-pound black Labrador Retriever loped into the barn,
As Bravo closed in on the barrels, Miquel turned to Darryl.
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As Bravo closed in on the barrels, Miguel turned to Darryl.
two hundred pounds of the pure stuff estimated street value of $18,000,000."
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two hundred pounds of the pure stuff--estimated street value of $18,000,000."
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I love the dog, Bravo. These K-9 helpers do such a great job. You've got some wonderful woofers in this story.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
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I don't think the drug secret is in the wind, anymore! Great action in this chapter. I'm still concerned about Annie.
Errors and suggestions:
The seventy-pound black Labrador Retriever lopped into the barn,
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The seventy-pound black Labrador Retriever loped into the barn,
As Bravo closed in on the barrels, Miquel turned to Darryl.
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As Bravo closed in on the barrels, Miguel turned to Darryl.
two hundred pounds of the pure stuff estimated street value of $18,000,000."
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two hundred pounds of the pure stuff--estimated street value of $18,000,000."
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I love the dog, Bravo. These K-9 helpers do such a great job. You've got some wonderful woofers in this story.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
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I loved the dog too...but then I think I like animals more than people. At least my babies love me and are loyal all the time. LOL
Smiles, Carol
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Yes, they're so sweet and such special friends. I don't know if I already asked you -- how many do you have?
God bless you, my friend.
Love, Mary Kay xoxo
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Mary is not holding back her feelings and so she shouldn't. The agents prepare to drive him off the property. They let loose their feelings as well as they drive off.
The proof of the drugs that are being shipped in the false bottoms of the wine barrels, is solid. Now the rest is clear. Follow Miguel and find the
person responsible.
Ralf
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
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Mary is not holding back her feelings and so she shouldn't. The agents prepare to drive him off the property. They let loose their feelings as well as they drive off.
The proof of the drugs that are being shipped in the false bottoms of the wine barrels, is solid. Now the rest is clear. Follow Miguel and find the
person responsible.
Ralf
Comment Written 08-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
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Thank you as always....Of course I am way behind which isn't strange either. Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
One conflict ends or is put on hold, and a new one begins. You sure know how to keep our minds flopping from one problem to another. Thanks for sharing another fine chapter. It's always fun! :-)
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
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One conflict ends or is put on hold, and a new one begins. You sure know how to keep our minds flopping from one problem to another. Thanks for sharing another fine chapter. It's always fun! :-)
Comment Written 08-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
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Thanks for reading, enjoying and the kind compliments. I appreciate it very much.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from robyn corum
Carol,
So they are even letting Miguel know they are onto the drugs, maybe? Or WILL be? Hmmm... You are killing me. Killing me! I never know what you are going to do! Except that you will always up the stakes. hahaha
I love it!
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
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Carol,
So they are even letting Miguel know they are onto the drugs, maybe? Or WILL be? Hmmm... You are killing me. Killing me! I never know what you are going to do! Except that you will always up the stakes. hahaha
I love it!
Comment Written 08-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
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Thanks for reading, enjoying and the kind compliments. I appreciate it very much.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
When gold and drugs surface, you have more than one reason to suspect each and every character in he story. Jack is suspect No 1. Wonder what the ladies are going to do? Whose side will they take? Jon is getting a mouthful. Bad guys know how to deal with outbursts. I'm enjoying it. Keep going!:):)
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
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When gold and drugs surface, you have more than one reason to suspect each and every character in he story. Jack is suspect No 1. Wonder what the ladies are going to do? Whose side will they take? Jon is getting a mouthful. Bad guys know how to deal with outbursts. I'm enjoying it. Keep going!:):)
Comment Written 08-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
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As usual, I am far behind on sending out my thank you and appreciation for reading, enjoying, and commenting on the story.
I truly appreciate it. Thank you so much.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from lyenochka
Sounds like the team are going to unravel this drug dealing gangster. Good show of Darryl's loyalty and desire for justice.
Question about:
"I'll pray for you, for our daughter and our granddaughter. "
Jon knows that the daughters and granddaughter are his? Did I miss something?
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
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Sounds like the team are going to unravel this drug dealing gangster. Good show of Darryl's loyalty and desire for justice.
Question about:
"I'll pray for you, for our daughter and our granddaughter. "
Jon knows that the daughters and granddaughter are his? Did I miss something?
Comment Written 08-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
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Thank you as always....Of course I am way behind which isn't strange either. Smiles, Carol
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
You continue to keep me enthralled! Stunning development.
"What's wrong with him? The dog is going crazy." Beads of sweat mingled in the hair on the back of [his=>MIGUEL'S (for clarity)] neck. He ran his fingers along the inside of his collar.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
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You continue to keep me enthralled! Stunning development.
"What's wrong with him? The dog is going crazy." Beads of sweat mingled in the hair on the back of [his=>MIGUEL'S (for clarity)] neck. He ran his fingers along the inside of his collar.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
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Fixed and thank you as always....Of course I am way behind which isn't strange either. Smiles, Carol
Comment from karenina
I knew those lot numbers Jack had circled early on would simmer to the surface! Of course! The drugs! (Brief thought that maybe Jack had MORE than suspected Ted this...and that got him murdered?). You always have me guessing Carol! So glad Mary gave hell's fury to Jon. Maybe Faith will convince her to forgive him, but I admit for now I like seeing him suffer... The temperature is rising! This plot is about to explode! Bonus: Annie has got to be found soon! (smile)--
How is SINthia going to react to all of this? Hope she's not counting on Mason!
So many more plot lines to diverge! Better pop some popcorn before reading the next chapter!
Sixer for SURE!
Karenina
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021
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I knew those lot numbers Jack had circled early on would simmer to the surface! Of course! The drugs! (Brief thought that maybe Jack had MORE than suspected Ted this...and that got him murdered?). You always have me guessing Carol! So glad Mary gave hell's fury to Jon. Maybe Faith will convince her to forgive him, but I admit for now I like seeing him suffer... The temperature is rising! This plot is about to explode! Bonus: Annie has got to be found soon! (smile)--
How is SINthia going to react to all of this? Hope she's not counting on Mason!
So many more plot lines to diverge! Better pop some popcorn before reading the next chapter!
Sixer for SURE!
Karenina
Comment Written 08-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021
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Hey, sweet girl...I have not heard from you in quite a while and I was trying not to disturb you, but now I am starting to worry. I held on to this one so I would remember the last time you were on here...Five days. I am praying nothing worse has gone wrong and you are simply taking a break from my ramblings. Take care and when you, please let me know that you are okay.
All my love and hugs, Carol
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I will PM you..........
Comment from Carol Clark2
Another great chapter! It sounds like there's not much chance of any reconciliation between Mary and Jon. Two small fixes: The black Labrador ... loped (spelling); You were right. The truck(')s headed....
Good scene with the dog barking at the drugs. Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2021
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Another great chapter! It sounds like there's not much chance of any reconciliation between Mary and Jon. Two small fixes: The black Labrador ... loped (spelling); You were right. The truck(')s headed....
Good scene with the dog barking at the drugs. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 07-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2021
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I apologize for not being able to get back to you quickly but there is way too much happening in my life... with the girls back and school, Matthew's movie, birthdays everywhere and of course trying to finish this story. I know you've read several chapters since this one and I hope a few things are clearer.
thank you as always, Carol
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I don't know how you do everything! I hope Matthew is feeling better and that the movie comes about soon. Blessings & prayers. Carol
