Home Haircut
Just a fun one16 total reviews
Comment from dellsworthpoet
A frightenly funny poem.
The pacing is good. The words reflect the whimsical message. The rhyme scheme is tight. Delightful.
Thanks for sharing. A good read.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
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A frightenly funny poem.
The pacing is good. The words reflect the whimsical message. The rhyme scheme is tight. Delightful.
Thanks for sharing. A good read.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
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Hi dellsworthpoet Thank you for your review my haircutting business is always open for business it has been quite slow actually vacant no bookings
Can?t understand why lol
Glad you liked it
Cheers Christine
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You are welcome
Comment from Sugarray77
Hahaha, Christy ~ how fun. You have written a very lovely and exceptional verse for your readers. I really enjoyed your focus on "home haircuts" as your theme for this poem. Your writing is exquisite!! So enjoyed it!!
Melissa
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
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Hahaha, Christy ~ how fun. You have written a very lovely and exceptional verse for your readers. I really enjoyed your focus on "home haircuts" as your theme for this poem. Your writing is exquisite!! So enjoyed it!!
Melissa
Comment Written 09-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
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Hi Melissa Thank you for your review always looking for new business Free haircut any style lol
Hope all is well with you
Cheers Chris
Comment from lyenochka
I love that you chose this topic to share your humorous take on the perplexing situation. My hair is long so I just trim the ends. But I have watched hairdressers so I have been cutting my husband's hair. He prefers me because I let him have it long-ish. The professionals get frustrated because one side of his locks are curly and the other side is not so they end up giving a very short cut every time trying to fix it.
I like your use of "fringe" for what we Americans call "bangs."
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2021
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I love that you chose this topic to share your humorous take on the perplexing situation. My hair is long so I just trim the ends. But I have watched hairdressers so I have been cutting my husband's hair. He prefers me because I let him have it long-ish. The professionals get frustrated because one side of his locks are curly and the other side is not so they end up giving a very short cut every time trying to fix it.
I like your use of "fringe" for what we Americans call "bangs."
Comment Written 08-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2021
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Hi Helen. Thank you as always I found a good topic to use my warped sense of humour lol No my husband goes to his barber so that saves him My son did not make an appointment with me can't understand why not lol a bit of fun to lighten the mood
Yes it is a fringe here in Aus 'bangs' would be curls I think here
Cheers Chris
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a cute and whimsical verse about something that is affecting us all now.
It's funny how we take certain things for granted, like a hair cut, until they are gone.
Sharon
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2021
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I think this is a cute and whimsical verse about something that is affecting us all now.
It's funny how we take certain things for granted, like a hair cut, until they are gone.
Sharon
Comment Written 08-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2021
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Hi Sharon, Thank you for stopping by for a home haircut I hope you are pleased with the outcome appointments welcome ha ha (No one has applied so far not even my son can't understand why)
Cheers Chris
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I think many people have been giving themselves a home hair-do! Your poem is so funny, I can just see you practicing on the dog, poor thing. LOL I'll be having my hair done next Tuesday, thank goodness. I'm sure your son will laugh at this fun poem, Chris. Well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2021
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I think many people have been giving themselves a home hair-do! Your poem is so funny, I can just see you practicing on the dog, poor thing. LOL I'll be having my hair done next Tuesday, thank goodness. I'm sure your son will laugh at this fun poem, Chris. Well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 08-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2021
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Hi Sandra, Thanks and you are probably right and I though I could have a go )at a fun poem The dog would also run away she is a Huskie so what fun I could have on her Hmmm) Yes I fi8nally have an appoint next week too although I have got used to my longer style I may modify my new cut
Cheers Chrisxx
Comment from Paul McFarland
Good job on the home haircut. I've been searching for a topic for a poem, and I think you have just given it to me. If it turns out okay, I may give it a shot on this site.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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Good job on the home haircut. I've been searching for a topic for a poem, and I think you have just given it to me. If it turns out okay, I may give it a shot on this site.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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Hi Paul Thanks for having a home haircut with me lol I will book you another appointment soon ha ha I will keep an eye out for your poem glad to give you inspiration
Cheers Christine
Comment from Midi O'Rourke
This is hysterical. It made me smile and laugh. Well written, very good flow. Good progression into hair madness. I learned a new word - whinge. Good job.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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This is hysterical. It made me smile and laugh. Well written, very good flow. Good progression into hair madness. I learned a new word - whinge. Good job.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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Hi Midi O Thanks for having a home haicut lol hope I did a good job I am very tempted to get the scissors out it may turn into a reality although my son had decided his long hair can stay didn't Like the 'pudding basin style' I offered ha ha
I love to write with humour Cheers Chris
Comment from robyn corum
Chris,
Hey, friend - if you don't mind, could you look the other way for just a moment? I have a sign for your son - just hold this up for him. No, no. hahaha No reason at all for you to look at it, silly girl. I mean, you KNOW I love you, right? Right!
So hold this up and turrrnnnn your head.... that's right. Juuustt like that. Now:
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Son. RUN!!!! RUN as hard and as fast as you can! Do not let your crazy, ding-dong mother anywhere near your head, right? RIGHT!
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Okkkaaayyy, then... All done. This was such a precious and adorable poem. I bet any haircut you do for your son or hubby or doggie would be PRECCCCCious!!!! Uh HUH. Now. I have to go. You have a marvelous day!!! Hugs----
hehehehe
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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Chris,
Hey, friend - if you don't mind, could you look the other way for just a moment? I have a sign for your son - just hold this up for him. No, no. hahaha No reason at all for you to look at it, silly girl. I mean, you KNOW I love you, right? Right!
So hold this up and turrrnnnn your head.... that's right. Juuustt like that. Now:
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Son. RUN!!!! RUN as hard and as fast as you can! Do not let your crazy, ding-dong mother anywhere near your head, right? RIGHT!
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Okkkaaayyy, then... All done. This was such a precious and adorable poem. I bet any haircut you do for your son or hubby or doggie would be PRECCCCCious!!!! Uh HUH. Now. I have to go. You have a marvelous day!!! Hugs----
hehehehe
Comment Written 07-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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Hi Robyn Thanks and your sign has worked he has run a mile (like the neighbours not sure why as I had the pudding basin ready lol)
Yes I am a crazy ding dong but I have so much fun and never really take anything too seriously and love to find the humour in many things as you know ha ha
Had fun with this one just for fun for a change
Cheer Chrisxx
Comment from aryr
This was so enjoyable that I really had to laugh when I read your narrative notes, Christine. I think we have all had the urges to do something. I loved the picture, it was priceless. Your words showed more bravo than your intentions, lol. Great job.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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This was so enjoyable that I really had to laugh when I read your narrative notes, Christine. I think we have all had the urges to do something. I loved the picture, it was priceless. Your words showed more bravo than your intentions, lol. Great job.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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Hi Alie Thaks again and I nearly ready to put this into reality although I would certainly bring attention if I did My hair like Adam hasn't seen a hairdresser for 9 weeks and I am also shaggy ha ha
My son has turned down my offer not sure why lol
A fun one anyway Cheers Chrisx
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Mmm I also wonder why your son turned down your offer, lol. You are so very welcome, Christine. I enjoyed it.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This is very skillfully and creatively written, descriptive, and funny. I'm sure your son--and anyone else--would love to sit down in front of you and your scissors! LOL!
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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This is very skillfully and creatively written, descriptive, and funny. I'm sure your son--and anyone else--would love to sit down in front of you and your scissors! LOL!
Comment Written 07-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021
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Hi Janice Thank you I hope you enjoyed your home haircut lol No my son had decided to stay shaggy the pudding basin didn't tempt him ha ha I am tempted to have a little snip as I am the same but will hang out although I did do a home colour not greys for me
Cheers Chris
