Comment from Mary Shifman

Excellent

I am really enjoying this book. When I have a little time for reading I'd like to start the beginning of it. You've created an interesting species and your characters are well developed. I look forward to the next chapter. The list of terms and cast of characters is helpful too.

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021

Thank you, Mary :)
I appreciate your kind words and generous rating. I should have this published by the of the year. The series has been so fun to write. If you're interested, you can check out my website at shanacongrove.com

Thanks again for your support!
Sincerely,
Shana :)

reply by Mary Shifman on 07-Sep-2021

I will check it out. Thank you,

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I love the way you have collared mercy and made it the hallmark of your imagination, if there is a way to save these characters you will. Bu I'm convinced there are folk that are so tinged with sin's malady they may be beyond redemption, like Michaels for instance, but of course Fiona's a different matter. Beautifully written as always Shana, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021

Thank you dear friend :)
Yes, Dr. Michaels asked for his fate but his mother Fiona did not. I did not enjoy ending her character, but sometimes there just isn't room for them in the story.
Although, the Breedline must move on. More adventures to come. Plus, they must face the rest of the Biters.
Thanks for always taking the time to read my stories. I always enjoy your reviews.
Always your fan,
Shana :)

reply by royowen on 07-Sep-2021

Beautifully done Shana

Comment from justafan

Exceptional

Your books always keep me locked in. You never allow the reader a glimmer of a chance to loose interest. Your work is that captivating.

Bravo my friend.

Always
Justafan of yours
Missy

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021

Thank you, Missy :)
I appreciate your kind words and generous rating. So glad you enjoyed!

Hugs,
Shana :)

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This Supernatural Science Fiction speaks aptly, expressively, thru' a solid narrative taletelling theme on blood cure thru' a compact plot development, fostered by just a few appropriate and realistic dialogues; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021

Thank you, Alcreator :)
Glad you enjoyed and it's always a pleasure hearing from you. Your reviews are inspiring my friend.

Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from AJ McCall

Exceptional

I could imagine that if you hadn't described Lenny sucking Jena's blood like that, it might've been really weird or awkward, LOL.
I love that Jena helped Lenny and wants to help his friends also, but will she have enough blood for all of them? I don't want her to run out. And I didn't know that some of the biters got away!!! If they manage to get out of that facility, game over. And Jace... he can't stay out of trouble, which is why Roman went with him. (I really like Roman lol.) Love this post!

HAPPY LABOR DAY!

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021

Thank you so much my friend! :)
Ha! Yes, it was weird writing the scene where Lenny drank Jena's blood while she was transformed in her creature. That one took me a while to come up with. And I am thinking about how she will heal Amelia and Augustus. That one will take good planning. And they still have to fight the rest of the Biters. Jace's Beast just might have to help them out. Glad you mentioned him. He is a character. Gotta love him, right? Thank goodness he has Roman looking after him.

Thanks again! Happy Labor Day to you too! I was out all day on the motorcycle enjoying the pretty weather.

Hugs,
Shana :)

reply by AJ McCall on 08-Sep-2021

Motorcyle, lol? SO you're a biker girl, huh? Cool! You're very welcome! And I hope you plan good and fast because I'm waiting to read the next post!! Maybe this one will come easier for you so you won't have to work so hard. Yes, I love Jace and all of them. (Including Roman, LOL.)

Comment from Shanna Bertrand

Good

Although this is not my preferred genre, your writing is good. Maybe take a second and describe where they are (although that may be in a previous chapter). Your dialogue is good as is your blood and gore descriptors.

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021

Thank you, Shanna :)
BTW... like your name.
Glad you enjoyed. And thanks for the tips.

Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from SHABAMO

Excellent

Fantastic work here. I love the world building and creation you've made. In some level it's very similar to a lot of popular where wolf vampire works, but on a deeper level you absolutely added your own twists to it and made it your own!

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021

Thanks so much, Shabamo :)
Glad you enjoyed the chapter. I was fun to create. My Breedline adventures have been a blast for me. This is the sixth book in the series and I hope to keep entertaining readers with new stories.

Thanks again!
Sincerely,
Shana :)