Output Positive
Changing ones attitude thru faith4 total reviews
Comment from Jewelzies
I Love It! From the willingness to change, to the focus on positivity. Simply choosing to write about such things, helps to shine a bright light on how important they truly are. I've always been one to explore the outer most constructs of my mind, & many who know me often say, "She's 'Outer Mind'!", but I do appreciate the occasional reminder that all these inner workings do serve a purpose as well. A job well done in my book! Write on! m/
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I Love It! From the willingness to change, to the focus on positivity. Simply choosing to write about such things, helps to shine a bright light on how important they truly are. I've always been one to explore the outer most constructs of my mind, & many who know me often say, "She's 'Outer Mind'!", but I do appreciate the occasional reminder that all these inner workings do serve a purpose as well. A job well done in my book! Write on! m/
Comment Written 09-Sep-2021
Comment from Senyai
Hi Mystery Poet,
Such an overarching poem! Beautiful aspect of faith that stretches the boundaries of the ability to include all who strive to know the unknowable... to seek a personal link to God.... whatever that name is called or religion. Universal thoughts is such a relief to hear in the same vein as faith. Inclusive. Brilliant!
Good luck with this awesome entry.
Senyai
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Hi Mystery Poet,
Such an overarching poem! Beautiful aspect of faith that stretches the boundaries of the ability to include all who strive to know the unknowable... to seek a personal link to God.... whatever that name is called or religion. Universal thoughts is such a relief to hear in the same vein as faith. Inclusive. Brilliant!
Good luck with this awesome entry.
Senyai
Comment Written 07-Sep-2021
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Spot-on titles for the theme enhance the imagery of this short pwerful poem--which, by the way, you classified as prose fiction--not sure if this matters for the contest.
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Spot-on titles for the theme enhance the imagery of this short pwerful poem--which, by the way, you classified as prose fiction--not sure if this matters for the contest.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2021
Comment from LisaMay
I find your poem interesting because of its juxtaposition of the inner mind, meaning a very personal experience, embracing universal thought - the bigger picture. Faith is wide reaching, starting from an idea, and can have great influence and impact.
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I find your poem interesting because of its juxtaposition of the inner mind, meaning a very personal experience, embracing universal thought - the bigger picture. Faith is wide reaching, starting from an idea, and can have great influence and impact.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2021
