Secrets in the Wind
Viewing comments for Chapter 45 "Secrets in the Wind - Chap 45"A story of loss, deceit, murder and crime
17 total reviews
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
This was quite a confrontation, between Mary and Jon! And quite a shock for Cynthia. It's about time Father Jon was put in cuffs (maybe not matching his collar) and Cynthia was sent packing.
Just some minor suggestions:
Dear heavenly Father,
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Dear Heavenly Father,
she almost fainted in shock, except for the hair color she was staring at her neighbor, Liz.
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she almost fainted in shock; except for the hair color, she was staring at her neighbor, Liz.
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The final scene, with Annie, was very heart-wrenching.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021
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This was quite a confrontation, between Mary and Jon! And quite a shock for Cynthia. It's about time Father Jon was put in cuffs (maybe not matching his collar) and Cynthia was sent packing.
Just some minor suggestions:
Dear heavenly Father,
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Dear Heavenly Father,
she almost fainted in shock, except for the hair color she was staring at her neighbor, Liz.
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she almost fainted in shock; except for the hair color, she was staring at her neighbor, Liz.
***
The final scene, with Annie, was very heart-wrenching.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021
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Yes, May Kay, there are a lot of gut wrenching and tear jerking chapters going on right now. Thank you for your suggestions and efforts to get the story written correctly. I appreciate yur time.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
So Cynthia and Jon are both involved in the kidnapping of Annie. They didn't plan it but they know about it and they know who did plan it. So in the end they are as guilty as the kidnappers. Now, everyone is present and accounted for regarding Jon, Mary, and their family. How will they ameliorate the ups and downs of their lives?
Poor Annie, the pawn in this game of chess.
Ralf
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2021
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So Cynthia and Jon are both involved in the kidnapping of Annie. They didn't plan it but they know about it and they know who did plan it. So in the end they are as guilty as the kidnappers. Now, everyone is present and accounted for regarding Jon, Mary, and their family. How will they ameliorate the ups and downs of their lives?
Poor Annie, the pawn in this game of chess.
Ralf
Comment Written 08-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2021
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I'll just say thank you for catching up with all of them. It takes a lot of time and I truly appreciate it. Hope you enjoy the story.
Smiles, Carol
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Yes, I am enjoying the story.
Ralf
Comment from robyn corum
Carol,
Poor thing! And man, I would have been so happy to see Cynthia arrested! Put in cuffs? Are you serious? That would have made my whole day! hahahahaha I think they just want to get Jon away from her to use him in finding his GRANDdaughter!!!
Thanks!
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
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Carol,
Poor thing! And man, I would have been so happy to see Cynthia arrested! Put in cuffs? Are you serious? That would have made my whole day! hahahahaha I think they just want to get Jon away from her to use him in finding his GRANDdaughter!!!
Thanks!
Comment Written 08-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
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As usual, I am far behind on sending out my thank you and appreciation for reading, enjoying, and commenting on the story.
I truly appreciate it. Thank you so much.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from lyenochka
I'm wondering why they let Cynthia go. She will go straight to Mason. I hope someone is trailing her. Now she knows some connection between Liz and Faith.
I was surprised at Faith's prayer. How did she know she was related to Liz? She only recently learned about Mary being her mother. But who told her about Hope? Even Mary didn't know.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
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I'm wondering why they let Cynthia go. She will go straight to Mason. I hope someone is trailing her. Now she knows some connection between Liz and Faith.
I was surprised at Faith's prayer. How did she know she was related to Liz? She only recently learned about Mary being her mother. But who told her about Hope? Even Mary didn't know.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
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Thank you as always....Of course I am way behind which isn't strange either. Smiles, Carol
Comment from lancellot
Cynthia cracked me up. She left Jon hanging. She was hard when things were under her control but the idea of being gossiped about while in jail didn't appeal to her. Good way to end the chapter too. Annie's fear is a strong cliff hanger.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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Cynthia cracked me up. She left Jon hanging. She was hard when things were under her control but the idea of being gossiped about while in jail didn't appeal to her. Good way to end the chapter too. Annie's fear is a strong cliff hanger.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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Yup, Karenina refers to her as SINthia and that woman is bad to the bone. She was going to save her skin regardless.
Thanks for the review and the stars. I am thrilled you enjoyed the story. Smiles, Carol
Comment from royowen
Of course Mary knows who Jon is, and I'm amazed Cynthia is allowed to escape, but that could be a strategic act. At last we hear from the dear child, and she is frightened and alone, which no child should ever be. Calling for Sebastian, a beautiful episode Carol, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021
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Of course Mary knows who Jon is, and I'm amazed Cynthia is allowed to escape, but that could be a strategic act. At last we hear from the dear child, and she is frightened and alone, which no child should ever be. Calling for Sebastian, a beautiful episode Carol, blessings Roy
Comment Written 06-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021
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thank you Roy for all your kindness and for the review. I always feel blessed when I know you are looking over my shoulder.
smiles, Carol
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Well done
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I wanted Cynthia to be arrested too. It's not right that it's just Jon, although he does have information about Annie. Cynthia is absolutely no good. I love the story.
They both climbed into the Jeep as Garth started the engine. As the doors slammed, he was speeding down the gravel road.
As Jon stretched to shake Faith's hand, Mary opened the screen door. "So kind of you to visit, Jon." Her voice was icy as she glared at him.
As Mary said his name, Jon jumped and snapped his head in her direction. Wide-eyed, he choked out her name, "Ma--Mary?" (3 sentences start with 'as' in a very short sequence.)
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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I wanted Cynthia to be arrested too. It's not right that it's just Jon, although he does have information about Annie. Cynthia is absolutely no good. I love the story.
They both climbed into the Jeep as Garth started the engine. As the doors slammed, he was speeding down the gravel road.
As Jon stretched to shake Faith's hand, Mary opened the screen door. "So kind of you to visit, Jon." Her voice was icy as she glared at him.
As Mary said his name, Jon jumped and snapped his head in her direction. Wide-eyed, he choked out her name, "Ma--Mary?" (3 sentences start with 'as' in a very short sequence.)
Comment Written 06-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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Thanks, Barbara...I'll try to fix that. As for Cynthia, Garth knows she isn't going far except maybe to Mason. He didn't want her to hear what Mary and Jon had to say.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
Reading another of your chapters is always a great way to start off my day. Then, after three or four hours gut wrenching emotions gone wild or mind racing out of control, I need a nap before getting anything done. But don't worry, I'm typical. I blame it all on you, rather than taking credit myself. LOL. Thanks for sharing and enjoy what's left of your long weekend! :-)
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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Reading another of your chapters is always a great way to start off my day. Then, after three or four hours gut wrenching emotions gone wild or mind racing out of control, I need a nap before getting anything done. But don't worry, I'm typical. I blame it all on you, rather than taking credit myself. LOL. Thanks for sharing and enjoy what's left of your long weekend! :-)
Comment Written 06-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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Hope you are doing something exciting for the weekend besides reading and sleeping.... but the reading is good!!! I so appreciate it!
Have a great day .... I am almost caught up on reviews. Cooking and cleaning is done until Thursday when Matt starts filming again. Aren't I lucky??? LOL Smiles, Carol
Comment from Judy Lawless
This is another nail biter, Carol. It's a good thing Pete had presence of mind to call Garth. Faith and Liz are too trusting. I'm wondering why Garth let Cindy go, but I can think of a reason or two. Poor little Annie. Well written.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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This is another nail biter, Carol. It's a good thing Pete had presence of mind to call Garth. Faith and Liz are too trusting. I'm wondering why Garth let Cindy go, but I can think of a reason or two. Poor little Annie. Well written.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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Garth knows Cynthia won't go far except maybe to Mason. He didn't want her hearing what Mary and Jon are about to disclose after Mary gets done pulverizing him. LOL
Smiles, Carol
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I thought maybe he thinks she?ll lead them to Mason. I didn?t think about the conversation between Jon and Mary.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
You are such an exciting writer, Carol, this part had me racing through it hoping that Sebastian would take a dive at Cynthia! And Garth and Hank let her go!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! No!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! They know she is in with Mason, and that she's trying to get hold of the gold. You are really stoking the coals up now, my friend, this story is HOT! Love it! Love and hugs. :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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You are such an exciting writer, Carol, this part had me racing through it hoping that Sebastian would take a dive at Cynthia! And Garth and Hank let her go!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! No!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! They know she is in with Mason, and that she's trying to get hold of the gold. You are really stoking the coals up now, my friend, this story is HOT! Love it! Love and hugs. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 06-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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Garth knows Cynthia isn't going far except maybe to Mason, and he didn't want her learning everything Mary was probably about to blast Jon with. Her icy veins are defrosting and she's ready to erupt...I hope. Smiles, Carol
